All Comments on 'A Decided Affair Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
divorce the whore and let her fuck others

or kiss her feet and keep on letting shit in your face.tell her its ok and you going to fuck one of her female friends.i hate to see men act like sissyboys or women disrespect their spouses.she don't have no respect for her husband.

goamz86goamz86over 16 years ago
Good start!!!

Good start, this idea has so many possibilities. hope you continue it. Needs to be a bit hotter though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
another one

another wimp cuckold story, can you think of something original?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
think twice

or more before starting on this path. You know how it starts but not where it ends, and that is valid for both parties. By telling after it happens, who says that it was just that time and that all is being told about it. And once the trust is gone, there are just problems left. Sorry, but I don't like this kind of "arrangements". They only open the door for a disrupted relationship and/or divorce eventually. G.Belgium

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
poor

Usual rubbish, reminds me of the normal porn soundtrack. please stop writing here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
The dialogue is way to immature and unreal.

It has potential for a couple to get into swinging in a safe sane consensual way. You left out the discussion of protection from diseases and pregnancy which would need to be discussed and agreed to before hand. The wife was wrong tho, she was already involved in an inappropriate affair with her boss. The touching and feeling are both sexual and emotional. Love is already beginning on one if not both parts. The line has already been crossed before this conversation of what was permissible was discussed. Also no time limit was given and she implied it would last a while and told him he could not begin his "affair" until she had completed hers. That is the pathway to divorce, sooner not later. Nope to immature and to unreal. And if she had kept teachers in line by enforcing dress code, the other females would already know she was involved and talking about it. Most cheaters are to sure they are to smart to be found out and generally they are to far into lust to be able to think.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
W.T.F.

Disaster,but he lets her set their marriage.

Harryin VAHarryin VAover 16 years ago
WRETCHED pathetic crap

why? Because of the 1 thing they DONT discuss. What happens if he CANT handle it? who cares... she certainly doesnt.

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<i> "I know, I know. One thing at a time. If we're going to try this sort of thing I want to start where I'm least uncomfortable. Being unfaithful to you does worry me – I don't know what might happen, but we've been building up to this and I want to do it. Do you think you can cope?" </i>

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Super wimpo low life husband says "YES I can" but suppose --just suppose he said: <b>"NO! Bedroom fantasy is one thing this is totaly different..." </b>

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Would that of stopped her? No way. She says she is worried what Might happened but NOT woried enough to slow down.

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so then Mr super wimp says

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<i> "What if he doesn't want to? What if he falls in love with you? What if he gets jealous? What if you're found out, by his wife or your colleagues? It could ruin your job, his job and destroy his marriage – I doubt if he and Fiona are having a similar discussion." </i>

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All good questions that at the very least the whore wife SHOULD at least be thinking about. Instead her answer is

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"I know, but that's part of the excitement."

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THATs her answer? Thats it?!!?

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Run dude run. As far away as you can

bornagainbornagainover 16 years ago
So Dumb

That story was nothing but a jerk off story it would have been better if the husband would have said "If you`re going to do your Boss I will do my secretary and that way we will be even and we can`t hold the affairs over each others head .

Pat

ProfWriterProfWriterover 16 years ago
Nice beginning!

I'll never understand why those who don't like these stories insist on reading them. Who knows where the marriage will go or if it will survive. It's their marrige, not yours.

They obviously have discussed the issue and are ready to try permissive infidelity. Rather than condemn them, let the story progress and don't display your own fears of not being able to cope with this issue in your own life.

Keep it going.

PW

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
weather report

the weather report is more entertaining than this - the emotional levels are the same though. Where did you learn your writing skills - at Marvel maybe?

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Great possibilities.

I hope the next chapters come quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
About As Interesting As Puking

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Thanks!

I LOVED this story. It had all the elements of sensuality that makes this sort of thing so hot. The mystery/threat of her promise to fuck the other man is so erotic. Don't be influenced by the flamers who want you to write according to their narrow imaginations and moral straitjackets. I think your story was very creative and exciting!

don87654don87654over 16 years ago
Very reasonable

I'm anxious to see more chapters of this one. What if she decides to fall in love with John and then starts believing that she might want to have his baby, too?

JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969over 16 years ago
Sorry!

Sorry but swinging is swinging and cuckolding is cuckolding

and this my friend is cuckoldind hope you enjoy it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
future

as long as thhis does not go the way of all others and she gets pregnant and it is because he is black, would be nice to hear in her own words about the fucking she was doing both orally vaginally and anal

roadbirdroadbirdover 16 years ago
well i think when shes fucking john he should be

fucking a la dy of his own...that way when she describes what shes doing with john he can say well i done this with so and so ....every noight she goes out he should also ...id say he needs to even if he has to hire an escort for the night ...at least then hed know she was safe and probably beautiful...lol plus he could get more pussy that way shes stuck with john and hes doing mary sue n ellen

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Damn Good Job There, Brit!

I'm sorry, but I really get sick of these self-appointed critics who feel their mission in life is to anonymously trash the work of others. Frankly, I thoroughly enjoyed the story and hope to read more of this writer's work. As for the negative critics who uselessly take up space on this site, either stick it in your ear, go into your favorite closet and blow you nose ..... or anything else that gives you pleasure and save your meaningless sarcasm to some other wasted venue. The key word there is meaningless. You seem to lack real creativity in your sarcasm, something I'm sure would be evident in any anything you might try to write. So to all of your who are bent on your hateful trashing ... why don't you just bugger off ..... we're all sick of your wimpering!!

MilliemoonMilliemoonabout 16 years ago
Interesting Start

There is nothing in this story that deserves the vicious comments it's received. It is a good start to a story which has the potential to be original and exciting at the same time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
ponder the future

I agree with Harry and others. Fantasies shouls remain just fantasies. Acting out is opening pandora's box. She is determined or should I say decided to go ahead regardles of the consequences to her marriga or to this John's. The questions accurately sum up what lays ahead of them : big troubles. Even if he seems to accept her determination, why does he have to wait until her affair ends. So she can say no to him, pretending she didn't like it after all ? Selfish and definitely without "love" or "consideration" for her husband. So yes, look for a replacement and then get rid of her. And this has nothing to do with moralist's or narrow views on marriages.

bruce22bruce22about 16 years ago
A typical starting position

Both of them are following naturally on their fantasies. It is possible that they are saying things in order to get more excited. There was a break in the I am going to do what I want skein, when she said she was worried about his reaction to the infidelity and asked if would be OK with it. His response half-hearted but positive. Personally I think we will see a train wreck in the next chapter but will follow the story.

don87654don87654almost 15 years ago
Honesty

I can see that this story is going to turn into something highly erotic. I would hope that the "affair" turns into something very erotic and loving, even tho both are married to others.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Sometimes

during the post-coital slump after a frenzied and extravagant night of fantasising and raw love, I might mention to Joanne that she seemed to get off very realistically as she described the cock of the 24th guy in the line-up slamming into her, indeed, I would venture, was there actually any truth in the nasty little stories that can so turn us on? After frying me with a withering frown for a few seconds, so that really, i knew not to go down that line, she would flicker a smile and say - well, maybe, and maybe no babe- because she knows goddammit how great fantasy is and what a fine line you must draw between realism and desire to keep that sexual high. I know she'd never really do it do me(gutted;)!)but we have some extraordinarily dirty sex once in a while! So I love your fantasy GDI and I haven't read the second part yet and though I have an idea where it's going(your juicy little wife is gonna get some...)thank you to you and all the other writers that brave the haters to write something horny on a horny site. Imagine if they had their way and all we could read was stuff like GW 66 and his anti sex tirades. (There you go 66 something for you to wank off over you fucking creep.)Mancelt uk

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
ahh, pathetic shit

out of a poopchoot, makes all the sense in the world, poopchooting the shit

ythebadgerythebadgerover 11 years ago
A well written start

it may be fairly easy to see where it's headed, but at least the dialogue was well controlled and it didn't stray too far betond the boundaries of believability.

rixelsrixelsabout 11 years ago
He Pushes the Envelope of Idiocy

Just say no! Your wife tells you she is going to cheat whether you say yes or no. She works closely with the other man. The other man is her boss. The other man doesn't care if she is married The other man is married. Your wife says that you will like it because it is your fantasy, when it is not. Your sooner or later ex-wife says that she hopes her boss is better than you. This is when you realize what an idiot you are for marrying her. You should have run away from your wedding ceremony like the church was on fire.

Pick up the phone, call her boss and tell him you will inform his wife of his affair just before you swing a burning 2x4 into his balls.

I wish Literotica had some kind of fantasy betting pool where readers could bet on how long this fictional marriage lasted after the fuck.

Lynn_MXXLynn_MXXabout 9 years ago

Nice start, though I long to read about a woman who cheats WITHOUT her husband's knowledge. They're out there, but they always end with the husband getting terrible revenge

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
So she announces she's going to fuck another man.

No real discussion. Just after all those years married I'm going to fuck another man? And why would he be okay with that announce? Other than the possibility of her getting pregnant or catching some nasty disease what is he getting out of her fulfilling her fantasy? Because let's face it. This is HER fantasy. At least it will be easy to have her followed and get the evidence of video. That way he can keep all the assets from the divorce. Why would he trade his wife's cheating for his cheating? Let her do it, divorce her, keep everything (threaten to have them both fired and spread the video to all family and friends) and then fuck whoever he likes with fear of reprisal. He certainly wouldn't want to stay with his wife. She cheats once. She'll cheat again. Their marriage is toast.

tatlockstatlocksabout 8 years ago
Good story, well told.

Thank you for an intense and sexy story, I enjoyed it.

There are the usual moronic comments I see, I notice they also choose to read the story, ho hum.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I see your stories were 1-bombed. It all comes from one religious retard pretending to be a crowd of hundreds. He posts multiple votes and comments from "Anonymous" or fake bios under the handles

26thNC, Harry inVA, thecarolinadreamer, Lakeeriegoatguy, KittyCampbell, Mattenw, ShadowRosie, WarGamer, Impo_58, Impo_61, Impo_64 etc., also possbly Rw43, Odiouser and Patillie among others.

This person votes multiple 5's to put a mediocre author in hall of fame for his revenge stories cutting off nuts etc., and gushes over these stories with comments like a sissy cuck wannabe. Then he 1-bomb's any good stories that express sexuality or cheating.

You will find repetitive comments from this person across 50% of the writers/stories in the LW category - "idiot", "garbage", "sewer", "fag", "worst writing" etc. - how can they all be the worst stories or worst writing?

In one of the bios and comments this person claims he was cucked twice but I suspect he never had sex with a woman at all and his comments express a lot of anger towards women, calling them garbage cans.

By the way, this person is a Trumpite running the same play book as Trump and his child molester fakes like Matt Gaetz - they claim to represent 90% of the people as a "majority" but it is just one person trying to destroy the world.

You can argue whether Trump is a cheat and a liar, a Russian agent or led a revolt, but one thing for sure: this Trumpite tried to shit all over your story. I would not have characterized myself as a Democratic voter, but for the next couple of elections I will vote against all the Republicans. That's the best way to vote where it makes a difference.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Tripe and crap.

Anonymous
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