All Comments on 'A Demon's Devotion Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Interesting

Beatrice, the reluctant mistress with intention, but gets trumped.

Levi, the reluctant master by accident.

The vision of Levy to not do this with brute force but with a touch of finesse makes this more interesting.

I'm curious where the story will evolve to.

Will the relationship between Beatrice and Levy be a showcase of interaction between soft and hard power? For example will Beatrice use her seductive side to also influence Levy?

Beatrice had a quite negative stance on the social form of school live. Will the story be how to deal with the circumstances, or how to change them?

Will the story evolve into a harem story? The clique which used its influence to some dark effects would be interesting.

Thank you for writing, I look forward to the next instalment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is super creative, and a great vehicle for the story. Really well done!, especially the dynamic of Levi needing to constrain his influence, and the promise of an adversary down the road.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

This is like reading a hentai manga, I love it!

TSreaderTSreaderalmost 3 years ago

A very yummy follow up chapter! I'm looking forward to more of this story. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I think that the second chapter was a well done follow up. Personally I hope that Beatrice and her friends get a taste of karma.

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 1 year ago

Bloody hell, what a great story this is turning out to be. I hope not only Beatrice but also her so called friends becomes his slaves also any he fucks the shit out of them. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Guys this is not the story Mesmerciless, this is plagiarism

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