All Comments on 'A Demon's Devotion Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Yippeee new chapter, one of stories I look for when it’s been about a month from the last one! So good! Can’t wait for more!!

SlofredSlofredover 2 years ago

time for him to give her the tools to take over the "click" of mean girls and let them all provide him with his LUST fix. After all he needs to increase his power quickly how better than to have Bea control the lust of the other three girls. Just an idea on a path for the story.

DaddydonthurtmeDaddydonthurtmeover 2 years ago

Still loving this story keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Enfin trop bien j'attednai ce chapitre

Just une demande pourriez vous rendre les punition et les récompense plus forte

J'ai hâte de la suite continuez

Petit idée peros j'aimerai qu'elle porte des habit vivant just une idée pour la suite

De tout façon vous êtes déjà mon écrivain préféré avec vox dominus et avec demon s dévotion.

👍💪

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Demon acquires submissive brat with humiliation kink. Love it ;)

Aussie1951Aussie1951over 1 year ago

I’m a little surprised how this story is going, end of chapter 5 and still no blow jobs or fucking. Especially Beatrice plus her bitchy girlfriends as payback for their scheming. Clearly at this point he’s just concentrating on Beatrice being submissive to him. Why doesn’t he just bend her over and fuck her into submission. It’s starting to get boring now and my patience is wearing thin…

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Best chapter so far! This domination is much more mental than physical. Just because it lacks sex, doesn’t preclude it being highly erotic.

Fred, I’m with you. Would love to see Beatrice seize control of the mean girls clique and dominate them with Levi’s help. That would be totally juicy!

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