All Comments on 'A Desperate Mom Takes Charge Ch. 01'

Loved the plot. It kept me so interested that I almost skipped the sex trying to find out if he got his life together. If there is a part two please continue the way you started. Telling a complete story with incidental sex. I know they will have more and better sex but don't rush it.

I liked the last section that Sandy and her son have closed some gaps.......

I think its time for Sandy to let him check out her big clit and show her how to better use it. It would be nice if she would now help him get off and help her get direct cock / clit stimulation. A full pussy pounding might make Sandy happier; when Hank is at the golf course. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Thanks !!

I did not vote for a 3 or 1 I think I hit it by mistake My vote for this story is a 5 STAR I think the story was fantastic :)

A bit complex and over the top but some realistic elements. Quite often mom has to take strict action with teen son to change behavior. A punishment and reward method usually gets good results.

its more like narration n story like we read everyday. a change but well accepted. very nicely built.

just curious " what happens to Heather?" .. thats am more interested in finding out.

For all the reasons given by the previous 5 commenters, I think this is quite an amazing effort.

This is a very well written story! I gave it a five because of how well you wrote it. While there were occasional spelling errors, they did not degrade the plot development. Well done!

I thoroughly enjoyed it

Love the build up. Keeps the reader wanting more. I've read your other posts and this one promises to be one of the best.

Once again good character development. Likewise, good plot development. Just finished reading 3M's My Many Mothers. When compared to 3M's, this story seems to be lacking strength but I do not know why or where. Keeping an open mind, I rated this chapter 5 stars.

This story was very unique; the emotion & growth felt so real. The pace of their relationship & sexual tension was just right. Wish it was edited better, but other than that I just can't wait to read the next!

I can't get into stories that involve drugs, even pot and cigarettes. I'll pass.