All Comments on 'A Desperate One Night Stand'

by IndianMom45

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NaureenNaureenalmost 4 years ago
Terrrrrific writing

Love your style of writing your thoughts ...sexually one of best silent expressions of a female enjoyments inside her desires

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

I've never had a stranger like that, but it sounds so hot!

alwayshardguyalwayshardguyalmost 4 years ago
erotic description

erotic and arousing all through the while just the flow of things

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Really desperate

I believe that this happened sometime immediately after your divorce and might be the first one post divorce. Could feel your desperate feel come through. You did not know his name too was a good ending to it

Ma8grets3weaknessesMa8grets3weaknessesalmost 3 years ago

I think the story is solid, very sensual and it flowed nicely but for an English-speaking audience you need a good editor. A little sprucing up and this would very highly rated.

indian_exec2000indian_exec2000about 1 year ago

Very realistic. Did it really happen? Please keep writing.

lotmorethanfun76lotmorethanfun768 months ago

Love the details as well as the realism; the confidence of a young man and the needs of a single woman. Love reading the story. Thanks

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47 year old single mother. Happy go lucky person with a smart, handsome and intelligent son. Working for a private organization in a senior leadership role. I am here to write stories from my real life experiences and chat a bit in the chat room. I don't role-play nor have any...