All Comments on 'A Detestable Woman'

I'm surprised about this. Coming into this I didn't really think much of it honestly, I just wanted something quick and easy to get off to, but this is so much more than that in only 1 page. It is hard to fit a whole story in 1 page for any genre, but it can be especially hard for a genre such as erotica, this story, however, I would love to see more of with these two characters. Great Work!

This was amazing! I really loved this introduction into their world - and I hope it is just that: an introduction. I would read an entire series based off of what I just read. Surprisingly complex and satisfying for such a short story. More, please!