All Comments on 'A Different Kind of Adventure Ch. 01'

While there were some issues with the language it is readable, especially if you are at all trained in a second language. An interesting story and I will read the next chapter.

I did find this story easy to read but than again I am somewhat bilingual. I also am grammatically challenged as are many of us with a math and science background. I liked and am waiting to see where this story is going in Ch, 02.

I enjoyed the story very much and am looking forward to more.

i hope u continue this and your other starts

Do you ever finish anything you start? Need fewer members like you who never finish anything.

Awesome start cant wait to read more