All Comments on 'A Different Knight's Gambit'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
great story

This was a great follow-up/sequel to your story "Stuck in the Middle of You" (which was also a great story) but they both reference a third story "Formalities" (which I assume is/was the first story written. However I don't see it listed here and cannot find it on the web).

Prequel: Stuck in the Middle of You (available here on Literotica)

Main story: Formalities (cannot find)

Sequel: A Different Knight's Gambit (available here on Literotica)

Has "Formalities" not been uploaded to Literotica yet?

Aside from the missing story, I love some of the size-play humor. (Knight launches self at dragoness... She shifts positions trying to avoid the attack, looses her footing... Knight ends up hurried headfirst in her private love cave (dang spell check blocking me). Oh well. At least he didn't end up head first up the other hole (or the other other hole). Choking on crap or drowning in urine. Or if she was gassy, being ass-blasted hard enough to become a red smear on the wall.

anonymousinblueanonymousinbluealmost 6 years ago
strange

I guess my impression of erotica has been terribly skewed by where I've been. Usually it is as bad as the first time catching your parents, and not in the taboo category. This was an alright sexual encounter with some fun leading up to it. But by the time he was clinging into her tongue for dear life, it was impossible to imagine how any sort of sexual act could also be taking place. Really. It was terrifying by that point. Nice way to drop in about the engagement ring, though. Probably not in the original plot outline.

It's better to wonder about the size of a dragon dildo than to know anything about that matter. Thank you for not drawing schematics to determine this, although it could be inferred from the dragon child size that it probably wouldn't impress a SWAT team much. I really don't think a human helping raise a half dragon is a good idea unless one is suicidal.

ArkusRuksulArkusRuksulover 4 years ago
Five. Stars.

That ending was the best ending this story could have had. Bravo!

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