All Comments on 'A Different World'

So glad to see how their story began.

I am happy to read Kenny and Edie's story, I know you will do them justice...can't wait to read more!

Excellent story! Sexy, compelling, stimulating. Makes me want to know more. Looking forward to this lucky couple's story. Love your writing!

Edie let her interest in Kenny be known and she put it on him.

Long time fan of Von and Jason's, so glad to read about these two now as well. Looking forward to more of both romances. Thanks!

The first thing that jumped out at me was how beautiful they are to each other, as well as the respect Kenny showed Edie.

Of course it was good to see the excitement in their love making, can't wait to read more, and see where this is going.

very well composed story

not much erotic charge for me,

(my turn ons are pretty specific,

and i love dark ladies, it's so natural

that 'interracial' stories don't hit

my private taboo fantasy realm)

but the narrative and dialog were

engaging and the plot nicely paced

and well developed with context.

i appreciate your treatment of the material

and the very respectful way these folks

breach rigid social conventions of race.

bonus for cameo by cannabis,

love seeing that normalized

as a part of lovemaking.

i'd love to see you write an incest story,

(i imagine it could easily fit in appalachia ;)

or perhaps get these couples

swinging with each other !!!

while von is pregnant and horny !!!

thanks for your contribution~

When the next chapter coming

You have quite the gift of putting together great characters and stories. I look forward to your continuation of the story world you have built.