All Comments on 'A Dirtier Mind Ch. 02'

by trixiej

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lordchilworthlordchilworthover 15 years ago
naughty... but nice

great imagery, cool storyline, few mistakes (lop sided not lob etc) but easily forgivable.... loved it... more ,more more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Slut is good

Nicely done I think every married guy wants a slut wife in the bed room and a prim wife in the dining room. In fantasy it was a great story very exciting. Just a great fantast. Keep writing Trix nice job.

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