All Comments on 'A Dirty Family Christmas'

And side note.

I really hate summer here. Too bloody hot. Don't even start on the humidity.

Scandalous...& exciting, forbidden, led by grandma!

Nice story, well executed. And to be honest, summer is the best time for nudity anywhere. Good job

But too fast,you could proceed with shyness & romance & with more chapters. In this regard I request you to publish a multi chapter basis family saga in which the family members will marry each other and will be impregnated. Being an Indian I prefer that the characters would be Indian , like Grams & Grampa as Rupadebi & Rameshbabu , only son & daughter-in-law as Ramenbabu & Rachanadebi, widow daughter Swastika with a 5 month son, Raju as Rachanadebi's only son, Kalu as their boy-servant. The family is very religious minded and the marriage will take place in their massive Worship-room in front of almighty God. Thanks.

I think you mean non-metric people. The imperial scale still uses decimals. 5 stars despite that slight on math. :)

Had a nice buildup. The end was a little rushed (would have liked to have Mom taking on the sons described in detail) but worth five stars easy. Wouldn’t mind seeing these characters again.

Exciting incest orgy.

Christmas traditions are shared by many families. However, not like this dirty one.

Perhaps next year, they will invite the neighbors to join their tradition. The more the merrier.

That’s pretty much how viagra works. Especially if your unknowingly slipped some during a Family vacation and all the white you have had desires for an incestuos fuck orgy with three generations of your Fam. I’d say thats pretty spot on! Hell, throw some meth in there and all the guys would do each other too! (Apparently a side effect of meth is it turns you into an instant flaming cock servant) who knew...

Love your shit Nikki! Dig Men at Work too! :)

“Ghost’s appear and faaaade away...”

Nice work

That was pretty fucking sexy. Read that in class and my cock didn't need any viagra to stay hard during that story. Can't wait to read more of your sexy incest stories.

Unfortunately, you got me used to better writing... Sorry, but compared to your previous stories (Nikki Dark being my all-time favourite author here), this one falls a little short... Maybe because of the inclusion of grand-parents, or the lack of story-building. I understand this is something quickly thrown together (and as such, it's still pretty good!), and I was pleasantly surprised to see something new on your page, but was not up to the usual hype...

FUN!!! Keep writing these fun, sexy shorts! You did a great job!

Love this story!!

Deeply erotic and you manage to say in a few sentences more than many writers say in whole paragraphs.

I love your other work but, please, keep writing these little gems.

....And funny. I like this family - especially the narrator!

This is the hottest story I ever read, please do a sequel!

... But still pretty hot. I doubt that there will be any waiting until Christmas with three brothers and a dad. I'm guessing Mom & Chelsea are going to have full dance cards all year.

Loved the story. Fast, fun and hot. Lots of cum too, perfect.

I really enjoyed that. Thank you for sharing it.

Could we please get a follow up?

"A Dirty Family Christmas:" - Eighteen Year Old Chelsea, Her Mother, Jenny and Father, Phil and Three Older Brothers, Jeff, Bill and Peter and Her Uncle, Stu and Her Paternal Grandparents.

At first I was reserved about reading this incest-laden, three generational holiday fuck-fest. However, I decided to stick my toe into (no pun intended) the water and was pleased with the results! After intently and reluctantly reading the full incestuous fuck-fest, I found there is much levity and humor, even with a large degree of family honor of the Holiday festivities! After reading, I found the hardest parts of the story to digest, was the keeping track of the contortion bodies of who was fucking, eating and/or blowing whom.

The reason I gave the story five (5) stars is because I only use the highest method of satisfaction, i.e., five (5) stars on Literotica, is when there is an incest or heterosexual family impregnation; Chelsea, in my mind is the mother of the fourth (4th) generation that will begin within the next nine months, although the author/writer did not definitively imply she is pregnant, in my mind she pregnant by her father, Phil!

The bottom line is, I DID thoroughly enjoy this story. The families use of humor, levity and total blood-kin participation made it easier for me to accept the story as written. Writer 'nikki_2021 has done a fabulous job of writing a great, festive family's traditional holiday celebration! She has shown that an incest family can honor their lifestyle with dignity and humor.....while retaining family-kin participation. I must say, a Fabulous Product Written and Delivered!!!!! My apologizes for the lengthy "soap-box!"

Setting new traditions is a wonderful thing.

Lots of fucking and sucking, with some humor thrown in. It's a 5

It’s nice when everyone gets a Christmas present!

Holy fuck lol

I thought after reading the disclaimer that I’d be O. K. with the stretch of how Viagra works, but it kept going way too far & went from fantasy to absurd.

I’ll stretch & vote 2 stars. Just unbelievable.

Bill S.

If you can write more stories like this, could you make it a tradition for ALL holidays?

Now that sounds like a challenge! A seasonal tradition for every family holiday. Mother;s day, Father's day, etc.

Then there's National secretaries day and postal day.

I could keep going, but I'll leave some for those who follow.

Well done. I wasn't distracted by spelling and grammar mistakes. Did consider some sort of diagram to keep track of who was doing who, when and with who.

This is crazy wonderful! It might not ever happen but it is pretty exciting. Grams went to some lengths for everyone to have a good time.

My Kind Of Kinky Granny! No Ass to Mouth?

Pretty wild. We had a tradition called soup nite, when the whole family would gather every Friday for dinner.

Once a week sounds like fun.

5*

Tc

I gave 4* as this is a bit farther down the ridiculous scale then my personal preference and the potentially risky pregnancy in any story is not my cup of tea.

However, as you said at the beginning, it is a fun little story and to suspend disbelief so it was worth the 4*.

THIS was the best reed? Hell id love 2 have this happen in real life, OOOYES??

My Mom, Mother-in-law and wife all have nipples at their knees but reading this tale makes me think of all the fun we might have had.

Next to having a threesome, double penetrating a female is next I’m sure. Tad on the extreme, but a fabulous read. 5*

That was friggin funny - and very sexy! Thank you.

cute1

Absolutely fab family orgy. I absolutely adore Cunt in every way possible, especially incestuous fucking and sucking. Just love multi fucking, where I am eating one cunt while fucking another and some times fingering a third. Absolutely fabulous totally drunk on cunt juice, love to watch the girls 69ing. Cunt crazed fucker, Lancashire, UK.

Crazy Aussie Christmas. Must have been a New South Welshman who wrote this. Mad bunch in that state.