by Just Plain Bob
sleep with her for 3 weeks as if I knew nothing
while quietly recording video evidence of her affair
I may have no choice but to add you to my list of Favorite Authors. This one was terrific.
They all ask what a cuckold could do to get even...here is one way. Thanks for an excellent read.
Would love a part two! Fun read.
I am curious about the rest of the story and, make no mistake, there is more to this story.
All that you can add are trivial. Only people with no imaginations can't figure out these minor points. A story requires two components, a writer with a good story idea; and a reader with a good imagination. You did your part...and I did mine. 5 Stars.
We all know he can do half the shit he says in this story. One thing for sure u cannot throw your wife out till the courts and lawyers do there thing. It going to cost you anyway.
It's very nice and refreshing to see fucking cheaters
Get what's coming to them.
You have a great opp to do a sequel and it could be even better!
Sweet revenge story. Read it, you'll like it. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
THAT IS THE WAY TO DEAL WITH A CHEATING FUCK SLUT WHORE CUM DUMP.....LOVE HOW HE PAID THEM BOTH BACK....
Don't know why so many keep asking for a sequel to this - everything you need is in there: husband found out about cheaters; husband sets up a plan to get back at cheaters; husband executes his plan perfectly; cheaters gets publicly humiliated to everyone they know, and kicked up by their respective spouses.
What more can you ask? No sequel needed - it's as good as it can get.
Short and to the point! Burn the bitch AND the bastard! One time! Toast! Scorched earth! Done and dusted! I agree! There is no Sequel required. These people were found out, set-up and then burned very badly! Everybody they Know were clued in and got to know precisely what these two cheaters did. Period! Check Mate!!!
That is pure cold revenge. Almost Satanic. But some friends deserve that (or more), if you ask me.
Second read, would I have enjoyed a sequel, yes. Is it necessary? Nope! It’s a great flash story. Better than most, wondering just how long they were married, if kids were involved (meaning did they have any kids) not if they were involved, also, just how long were they supposedly friends. Other than that the punishment fit the crime!
Secret Agent Man gets it done in a style that any normal man would ever be able to do. But then, I like James Bond.
If you give them a million dollars, they complain you didn't give them two. This is one of the better stand alone stories. One of my pet peeves is stories that stretch on forever. The trouble with adding another chapter to tie up points of little revelance is you open up even more points that need to be tied up...and you wind up with eight chapters of drivel that started out as a very interesting story. My opinion? Let this one stand as is. Accept 4 stars (or, as in my case, 5 stars) and be happy. Crank out another story. This one is done.
Straight and into the point.
No fat, just lean muscle fiber, all excess tissue removed with a scalpel.
How great was that? Never gets old. "How could you do this to me?" Easy cheating cunt. Now suffer the consequences.
I've seen a lot of responses complaining about your ending but for me your stories reek of reality. No angry reactions but a believeable response for a man who wants to keep what is really his after losing the one woman he thought would be his forever.
...great burn the bitch, and the bastard! Loved it. 5 stars. Thanx
Loklie
I can't tell if you are the fucker or the fuckee in this story. I love the 'get even' plot and hope you have others up you sleeve - of course you do.
Isn't it convenient that the lovers describe what they do and how long they have been doing it in over heard conversations.
"How could you do this to me?"
You crush your spouse with infidelity and talk smack about your husband with your cheating lover, and that's the first thing you have to say, "How could you do this to me?"
I can't see anyone getting married now days without doing 2 important things.
(1)Get an unbreakable pre-nup.
(2) Go through pre-marriage counseling for a year. Issues will come out and be dealt with 'before' you marry. It also teaches practical, honest communcation between the couple. That's solid gold.
With the lopsided way the courts side against husbands during a divorce, pre-marriage counseling should be a requirement of law before issuing anyone a marriage license.
I mention this to any young fellow who tells me he's getting married. Told my sons too, but they didn't listen. Paul McCartney made the mistake of not getting a pre-nup with his second wife who turned out to be a nightmare and it cost him.
BTW - I knew a couple who did pre-marriage counseling and later went their seperate ways. I liked them both and it was sad to see them part, but they saved themselves a whole lot of money, time, and hurt doing what they did before deciding to get married.
judges throw them out all the time
I agree with #2, though I'd also say no kids for 5 at least five years after the wedding, and throw in a nuptial agreement stating a divorce is automatically triggered the moment one spouse stops contributing 50% of the household bills with their salary
Its not a legally binding doc so it cant be thrown out but it will trigger a divorce quickly enough to make any alimony as minimal as possible
"Not near enough sweetie" - Generally speaking, it's the wife who determines how much sex they'll have, so if she's not getting enough, speak up! Most husbands aren't going to say no! Also, if he's not that good anyway, why complain about not getting it enough?
Caught and punishment fits crime
Only thing wrong with this story.. It's just way too damned short.
Definitely one of best
Caught and punishment
Yee Haw
Probably the best JPB story I've read. He destroyed her and the lover. Great story.
...that ticked all the boxes nicely! In reality, his life will be shit for the next year as she fights for everything, but for fiction it works nicely.
This is a short story...but this guy goes for the most pain...man you goto love this guy...and I got a good laugh on how she gets thrown out of the house......
One of my three favorite JPB stories. Great revenge on both cheaters.
BURN BABY BURN! Always enjoy a good JPB story, even the third or fourth time. Thanks Bob!
somewhere east of Omaha
A classic JPB story. I’ve read this one a few times and it never fails to bring a smile to my face. You can tell, of course, that it’s a Golden Oldie by the fact that both the electronics stores mentioned in the story bit the dust years ago. Anyway, it’s still a very good story.
Well, if this is something one consider to do, while it sounds cool it would end up with a lot of charges for "Bob" with a great chance for some prison term.
Ok. I gave it 5 stars. It appears wifey is in shock, and does not know what to say, at this point. I would think a second chapter, would be in order.
He makes a good point. If she really thinks he's that bad of a husband, why would she want to stay with him? Oh, that's right: cake-eater syndrome (cuck provides bucks, studs provide... well, you know).
Revenge is best not served at all, just let Time do its work. Soon enough, the cheating wife will lose her looks as she ages and become unfuckable, then she'll get sick and die. Just divorce her and get on with the life you have left to you.
This is an awesome story, but it ends before the best part. We got to see the extent of his revenge, but not how she suffers from the aftermath.
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By far the most satisfying scenes in a BtB tale are when the cheating wife watches her cushy life come crashing down around her ears. She finally suffers the brutal consequences of betraying her husband and knows, without a shadow of a doubt, that she has irreparably ruined the rest of her life.
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In this story, the realisation had started to sink in, but unfortunately JPB ended it before we really got to revel in her self-inflicted misfortune. Reading about a devastated Marlene being ostracised by all her friends and family would've been great. I would've also loved to hear more about Brian being destroyed as well... any guy that screws his best friend's wife deserves to burn in hell.
what happens if the bush beats back. TK U MLJ LV NV
Serves the cheaters right. Glad hubby wouldn't put up with it and the best friends wife. Maybe they will get together.
Looks like Marlene and Brian are up shit creek and it isn't just her asshole. They should change wives after Marlene gets cleaned out (not just her asshole), and be set for life. OR, the whore and her master could jump out the upstairs bedroom window and turn their bodies to jelly...
Short, sweet, succinct. Seems like almost all Bob’s revenge stories are that way and that’s why I like them so much. I liked this one 5⭐️stars, Ten if they had a double-clutch button. Thanks, Bob.
Mama's little baby loves it short and sweet. "Great White” This story, besides well-constructed is what i love to read. Yes, if the husband is the cheater, then he deserves the same. These stories with the same general amount of information, that drag it out over 2-3 chapters are a waste of space. Great job for a short flash story.
Too short. Would've loved to see more detail of the wife's downfall and her attempts at explaining why she did what she did.
JUST A CUCK HUSBAND WHO WAS SO ENTHRALLED BY THE SKANK AND BEST FRIEND THAT HE HAD TO FIND HIS BALLS BEFORE ACTING ON THE CHEATS
NOT A CUCK, You ignorant oaf! A man with enough patience and control to truly burn the bitch to a crisp.