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by Just Plain Bob

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AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

5 Stars from GW on this one ;. Heck all i did was send some shots of my ex with her boy toy . Her family did not like it for some reason

AnonymousAnonymous26 days ago

Thought he waited entirely too long to reek destruction. Should had the paper work completed by now and served.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

A five rating, just for the last line if nothing else. A perfect finish. Anybody who can see the rest of the story is an idiot.

RePhilRePhil2 months ago

Dear readers please pay attention!!!!!

JUST PLAIN BOB NEVER FINISHES A STORY. ITS HIS THING AND WE ALL LOVE IT!! SO SHUT THE HELL UP AND MOVE ALONG.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Good one brother. I remember your work at another site years ago. Glad your stories have popped up again. So many of these authors write shit about how great it is if the wives are cheating on their husbands, usually with some black guy. And here you are evening the score.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Neatly done. All that need be said. Five stars.

redboat7redboat73 months ago

Great story!! Loved it!!

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I think your story is good but it has no ending but the story's that you have written have no ending you write very well but you need to give them an ending

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I don't know why I read this. It didn't click that it was another JPB blockbuster...hahaha. His stories are probably like he fucks, he starts a great but can't keep up the effort and sure can't finish. Another JPB classic with no ending.

Billy_Ray_BanBilly_Ray_Ban4 months ago

This is how it’s done! Of course, it would never go down like this, but it was entertaining nonetheless. 5/5

FluidswallowerFluidswallower5 months ago

Another excellent tale, well-told and totally6 entertaining!! Thanks for another really good read!

Kernow2023Kernow20235 months ago

needs finishing

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Needs an epilog.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Another unfinished story. Sorry Bob everyone loves you I think you need a couple more paragraphs.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

5 Stars on a great story. My ex hated me, and I only sent pictures to her dad and Stepmom. This is the JPB that I like.

Buster2UBuster2U7 months ago

Another 10 Big Blazing stars for JPB for another great story! Bob, you are without a doubt one of the best on Lit. Your stories show that you have experience, knowledge and imagination as well technical knowledge. You are the best. Thanks, Buster2U

oldpantythiefoldpantythief8 months ago

Funny but not very realistic. Not so much a BTB as it is humiliation of the cheaters. Well, it is fiction.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Fantastic I just love a great revenge story I’ve read 2 of them so far so good thanks

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Why the complaints over 3 fucking weeks?

Three fucking weeks of her betrayal on tape makes it impossible to rebut his position.

Three fucking weeks of compiled video open for her world to see her as a SLUT.

Three fucking weeks of betrayal cannot be explained away, neither to friends, workmates, parents, and family Court judges.

Three fucking weeks—-how so purely delightful!

mariverzmariverz9 months ago

JPB ... Lo hiciste otra vez!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

excelente relato

inka2222inka222211 months ago

Jeez, I almost forgot JPB used to be a good writer who wrote good BTB stories, which is why I started liking and following him. A pity he's got far more pro-cheating lately :(

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Why wait 3 weeks? The day I was waiting for arrived. What day? Why was he waiting for it?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Waiting 3 weeks is cuck BS. You have video and audio already. Pull the trigger

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Not sure why he waited 3 weeks. Wouldn't one weekend be enough for the footage? Anyways good burn.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

you got it right with this one. 5

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow. I loved it, gave it a 5. The only thing I question, is could he be legally liable for distributing the porn without her permission, and writing the things he did at the other guys work? I am sure security footage would have shown, it was him. Of course, father in law might have looked the way. But IDN, if the tapes would fall under “revenge porn”? Any body have any experience with this?

GreWulfGreWulfover 1 year ago

That's the way to do it.Slash and burn.

Glitch22Glitch22over 1 year ago

Great story I loved it

msdaniemsdanieover 1 year ago

Wish I could give you 100 stars!

tonyneatotonyneatoover 1 year ago

BTB BTB BTB BTB BTB ***** 5 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Standard BTB. Not sure why he even waited the additional three weeks

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

NICE!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Could have been a 5 if the ending had been more complete.

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShadesover 1 year ago

Enjoyed this Story. Thanks for your writing.

OdessaLesOdessaLesalmost 2 years ago

And that’s the way it’s done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

NOT A CUCK, You ignorant oaf! A man with enough patience and control to truly burn the bitch to a crisp.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Ended too quick. 4 star

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Love the last line.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

JUST A CUCK HUSBAND WHO WAS SO ENTHRALLED BY THE SKANK AND BEST FRIEND THAT HE HAD TO FIND HIS BALLS BEFORE ACTING ON THE CHEATS

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Another well done story & another 5 🌟.

Bill S.

pummel187pummel187almost 2 years ago

"you still here"? Oh brother that is classic! lol

HooHaa77HooHaa77about 2 years ago

Too short. Would've loved to see more detail of the wife's downfall and her attempts at explaining why she did what she did.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Mama's little baby loves it short and sweet. "Great White” This story, besides well-constructed is what i love to read. Yes, if the husband is the cheater, then he deserves the same. These stories with the same general amount of information, that drag it out over 2-3 chapters are a waste of space. Great job for a short flash story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Short, sweet, succinct. Seems like almost all Bob’s revenge stories are that way and that’s why I like them so much. I liked this one 5⭐️stars, Ten if they had a double-clutch button. Thanks, Bob.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good story that ended too quickly

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Great story Wish they had those minicams when I caught my ex doing it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Looks like Marlene and Brian are up shit creek and it isn't just her asshole. They should change wives after Marlene gets cleaned out (not just her asshole), and be set for life. OR, the whore and her master could jump out the upstairs bedroom window and turn their bodies to jelly...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

A lazy fuck writer!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Serves the cheaters right. Glad hubby wouldn't put up with it and the best friends wife. Maybe they will get together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

No way would I fuck a bitch that I knew was cheating on me.

tazz317tazz317over 2 years ago
WHEN ONE BEATS AROUND THE BUSH

what happens if the bush beats back. TK U MLJ LV NV

PowersworderPowersworderover 2 years ago

This is an awesome story, but it ends before the best part. We got to see the extent of his revenge, but not how she suffers from the aftermath.

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By far the most satisfying scenes in a BtB tale are when the cheating wife watches her cushy life come crashing down around her ears. She finally suffers the brutal consequences of betraying her husband and knows, without a shadow of a doubt, that she has irreparably ruined the rest of her life.

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In this story, the realisation had started to sink in, but unfortunately JPB ended it before we really got to revel in her self-inflicted misfortune. Reading about a devastated Marlene being ostracised by all her friends and family would've been great. I would've also loved to hear more about Brian being destroyed as well... any guy that screws his best friend's wife deserves to burn in hell.

invisible_bridgesinvisible_bridgesover 2 years ago

Revenge is best not served at all, just let Time do its work. Soon enough, the cheating wife will lose her looks as she ages and become unfuckable, then she'll get sick and die. Just divorce her and get on with the life you have left to you.

desecrationdesecrationover 2 years ago

He makes a good point. If she really thinks he's that bad of a husband, why would she want to stay with him? Oh, that's right: cake-eater syndrome (cuck provides bucks, studs provide... well, you know).

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Shove it donuts. It’s a great story. Let it go at that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Ok. I gave it 5 stars. It appears wifey is in shock, and does not know what to say, at this point. I would think a second chapter, would be in order.

dark2donut2dark2donut2almost 3 years ago

Well, if this is something one consider to do, while it sounds cool it would end up with a lot of charges for "Bob" with a great chance for some prison term.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

A classic JPB story. I’ve read this one a few times and it never fails to bring a smile to my face. You can tell, of course, that it’s a Golden Oldie by the fact that both the electronics stores mentioned in the story bit the dust years ago. Anyway, it’s still a very good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

5 Stars easily .. BTB

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

BURN BABY BURN! Always enjoy a good JPB story, even the third or fourth time. Thanks Bob!

somewhere east of Omaha

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Ummmm

What is this ‘tape recorder’ of which you speak?

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Still more

One of my three favorite JPB stories. Great revenge on both cheaters.

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 3 years ago
just dont get a divorce

live you life and fuck the whore

MarkT63MarkT63over 3 years ago

Good BTB!!! Hope he isn't screwed in the divorce...

LT56linebackerLT56linebackerover 3 years ago
BTB...

Need more context. Good one, though. The Bear approves.

The BEAR

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Dave69

Excellent story with lots if turns. On if my favourite stories.

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Once more for this perfect BTB. Big is on point.

johsunjohsunalmost 4 years ago

If only it was so easy in real life.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
When you look up BTB in the dictionary?

This is the definition.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
She is busted..........

This is a short story...but this guy goes for the most pain...man you goto love this guy...and I got a good laugh on how she gets thrown out of the house......

Deprived891Deprived891about 4 years ago

Too short, extend the story, I liked it.

Just_WordsJust_Wordsabout 4 years ago
As revenge stories go...

...that ticked all the boxes nicely! In reality, his life will be shit for the next year as she fights for everything, but for fiction it works nicely.

robroy93robroy93about 4 years ago
Best

Probably the best JPB story I've read. He destroyed her and the lover. Great story.

jtwheelsjtwheelsabout 4 years ago
Read again should have been 5 stars Not 4 but.made it favorite

Definitely one of best

Caught and punishment

Yee Haw

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
First read

Only thing wrong with this story.. It's just way too damned short.

26thNC26thNCabout 4 years ago

Reading again. Still think it is Bob's very best.

jimjam69jimjam69over 4 years ago
Good story

Now that's a nice clean gotcha!

jtwheelsjtwheelsover 4 years ago
And the wheel keeps turning and it's me it's crushing

Caught and punishment fits crime

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 4 years ago
Late Thought

"Not near enough sweetie" - Generally speaking, it's the wife who determines how much sex they'll have, so if she's not getting enough, speak up! Most husbands aren't going to say no! Also, if he's not that good anyway, why complain about not getting it enough?

fritz51fritz51over 4 years ago
I agree with 26thNC

Best JPB story yet

TajfaTajfaover 4 years ago
More Please

Would love to hear what happened next. 4 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
danoctober pre nups arent worth the paper they are written on

judges throw them out all the time

I agree with #2, though I'd also say no kids for 5 at least five years after the wedding, and throw in a nuptial agreement stating a divorce is automatically triggered the moment one spouse stops contributing 50% of the household bills with their salary

Its not a legally binding doc so it cant be thrown out but it will trigger a divorce quickly enough to make any alimony as minimal as possible

danoctoberdanoctoberalmost 5 years ago
Cheater complaining....

"How could you do this to me?"

You crush your spouse with infidelity and talk smack about your husband with your cheating lover, and that's the first thing you have to say, "How could you do this to me?"

I can't see anyone getting married now days without doing 2 important things.

(1)Get an unbreakable pre-nup.

(2) Go through pre-marriage counseling for a year. Issues will come out and be dealt with 'before' you marry. It also teaches practical, honest communcation between the couple. That's solid gold.

With the lopsided way the courts side against husbands during a divorce, pre-marriage counseling should be a requirement of law before issuing anyone a marriage license.

I mention this to any young fellow who tells me he's getting married. Told my sons too, but they didn't listen. Paul McCartney made the mistake of not getting a pre-nup with his second wife who turned out to be a nightmare and it cost him.

BTW - I knew a couple who did pre-marriage counseling and later went their seperate ways. I liked them both and it was sad to see them part, but they saved themselves a whole lot of money, time, and hurt doing what they did before deciding to get married.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Convenient

Isn't it convenient that the lovers describe what they do and how long they have been doing it in over heard conversations.

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Favorite

My.New favorite.Bob story. This one is great.

danoctoberdanoctoberabout 5 years ago
So good.

Wish there was more to this one page flash story.*****

rodryder44rodryder44over 5 years ago
A lesson learned...

I can't tell if you are the fucker or the fuckee in this story. I love the 'get even' plot and hope you have others up you sleeve - of course you do.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Epic...

...great burn the bitch, and the bastard! Loved it. 5 stars. Thanx

Loklie

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Let Them Complain

I've seen a lot of responses complaining about your ending but for me your stories reek of reality. No angry reactions but a believeable response for a man who wants to keep what is really his after losing the one woman he thought would be his forever.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 5 years ago
Oh Yeah

How great was that? Never gets old. "How could you do this to me?" Easy cheating cunt. Now suffer the consequences.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
You must be a surgeon

Straight and into the point.

No fat, just lean muscle fiber, all excess tissue removed with a scalpel.

DoNotPassGoDoNotPassGoover 5 years ago
Burn bitch burn!

*****! A classic!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Some People Are Never Satisfied

If you give them a million dollars, they complain you didn't give them two. This is one of the better stand alone stories. One of my pet peeves is stories that stretch on forever. The trouble with adding another chapter to tie up points of little revelance is you open up even more points that need to be tied up...and you wind up with eight chapters of drivel that started out as a very interesting story. My opinion? Let this one stand as is. Accept 4 stars (or, as in my case, 5 stars) and be happy. Crank out another story. This one is done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Improbable but fun!

Secret Agent Man gets it done in a style that any normal man would ever be able to do. But then, I like James Bond.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Yes

Yes,that's the way to do it.

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Just a Dirty Old Man (of course I have been one since I was thirteen)who likes to write about the things that I've seen and been exposed to in my life. There is a little bit of me in almost all of my stories and in some of them there is quite a lot. I leave it to the reader ...