by inkyscandal
please write more,more,more...what a doctor visit that was.maybe he'll do some middle aged ladies as well! can't wait to see what's in store in the next chapter's.great start.
Great descriptions. The doctor deserves to get his in chapter 2.
My goodness this story was just fantastic I was wishing I was this young lady having all of these fantastic things done to meeeeeee oh yes indeed oh how I wish please please give us a chapter two soooooooon pretty please:) keep up your brilliant writing I simply luv doctor patient stories they get me so hot PHEW!!!!!!!!!!!
Hope there are several more Chapters to this one! I am also drained just from reading it and would have liked to done the exam myself. :-)
Well done and making me dream too...thanks.
The doctor is one controlled man to keep from fucking that little sweet girl. Especially since that's what she really wants and needs. Thanks for the good story and hope to read more....Rich
I simply cannot wait for more! At first I though it was going to be to long.... Now I know it was too short. When do we get to watch another Doc's visit?
I'm so besotted with this story that I searched through four or five pages of stories with the doctor tag to find it again. This time I'm going to make sure I bookmark it.
Of all the stories I've read on this site over the years, THIS ONE sticks in my head. You did an amazing job writing it from beginning to very end. The story itself was hot & I was sad to reach the end! I would really love to see more from you, or more to this story :-)
Fantastic story. I think I would have loved to have had that exam! I am really looking forward to reading more.
A very well written story. Wish you'd have written more. It appears Literotica is no longer what it was. I'd love to read more of your stories.
Excellent. 5 stars. Very well written (diction, structure, grammar, etc.) Terrific imagination.
Congratulations on your talent.
Wow ..... talk about a patient totally doing as the doctor says. Very sexy and erotic.
Couldn't decide between 1 and 2-think this way beyond fetish-quite surprised Lit allowed it under that heading...
have read doctor exam Lit before, and enjoyed...
not this ...more like sadistic psychological manipulation under guise of "doctor's orders/doctor knows best"
after 1st page, him telling her to kneel, and her complying-! wondered WTF and skipped to Pg3, then 5-not ever the kind of story I would start had I known