by amandamagik
I don't know why, but I always found women dominating other women more erotic than men dominating women. Great story. 5stars.
Great story and it's very well written. I'm not a women, or lesbian, obviously but that was one of the hottest seductions I think I've every read. I am a photographer and know of the instant connections which can be made with a subject, and the down falls which can follow, but you handled it well. I also like the fact that you portray your sub Lucinda as strong in most aspects of her life and independent even though submissive to her partner. A bit of a brat as she seems to like pushing the limits of her D/s relationship well admitting she loves Emma beyond it all. The other thing I liked is that you didn't portray either of them as super Dom or Sub. Emma made a major mistake as a Dom by punishing her sub well angry. That situation can I believe get into all kinds of dark areas. You just don't read about that very often on LE. Her breakdown and remorse seemed very genuine. I hope in the future you expand the back story and what lays ahead for them. (that goes for the “Cheerleaders” to)
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Cheers
What a lovely, romantic story. The love is so strong and clear and obvious. Great job, thanks for writing it.
and just like that the power dynamics between the two have changed drastically. Will she top from bottom?
Sounds like a very loving couple. Could you re-visit them later? They both seem to more stories to tell.