All Comments on 'A Dove's Goodbye'

Instead it's a downer of a story. Very well written, and evoking powerful emotions, but the ending destroyed any eroticism the story had inspired.

My vote is based solely on the author's technical skills, and his great descriptive abilities in the first 3/4 of the story. However, the ending left me completely cold.

Kydreamer

I found this story moving, erotic, thought provoking and just excellent. Some really evocative writing, and very powerful.

You know i always have enjoyed your writing! I am glad to see you are allowing yourself to expand in diffrent directions and continue to grow as an author. Can't wait to see what will come next!

-Tina