All Comments on 'A Downward Spiral'

I want more desolate lands of the Abyss populated with undead and demons! Not to mention whoever is doing thier research in this library in the first place, I look forward to more!

Only mildly erotic, but a great plot and the ploy of being a retrieved log, diary, worked well. I was struck by the same dark, worldly construct as we read in Edgar Alan Poe's works. Well done but work in more eroticism.