All Comments on 'A Dragon's Slave Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
her beautiful Hair!!!

Why'd you make her bald?! =[

slavesmistressslavesmistressabout 8 years ago
So glad to have found this!

I'm getting more and more impressed as the story moves on. I hope this story goes for a very long time.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Yay

It's been a while but I loved it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

It felt somewhat short, and though the introduction of an existential conflict is important, it felt somewhat rushed. Though this is a minor tarnish, something that could easily be washed away if the quality of the story is at least somewhere near the quality of the last two chapters. Not bad work thus far.

SyrustheVirusSyrustheVirusalmost 10 years ago

Needs to be longer....still good

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