All Comments on 'A Dragon's Tale Ch. 49'

Maybe you're just having him do it in the background, but Ethan seems to have forgotten about enchanting himself, with the nearly endless mana available from his wives..

However up to your usual standards :)

It's good Sarah figured out Lady Ekthros on her own. And now things are starting to heat up.... Great fun, thank you.

Hard to credit curious brilliant always asking Beth from the family she's from knows nothing about politics!

Ilike that the author using angel Gabriela to twist story line. Same kind like puzzle or clue in the near future.

Excellent!

Thank you. One of my favorites.

Another wonderful story from your pen. Really looking forward to the next story.

One of the best chapters yet! For numerous parts. Gabriella and the movies was great. Now begins another painful month of waiting… 🥹

Can’t express how much I look forward to each new chapter submitted. It has been a long journey and have enjoyed every moment.

Many thanks for this entertaining story!

Continued excellence, only seems to be one problem. You write too slow. Great job!

I like the overall story line but it's getting a bit long on the meaningless details and rehashing of things that are already well established. Also it would fit better in the non-erotic section lately.

Outstanding chapter, keep on writing more.

I love how Fiona speaks. But I hate how she makes me respect lord delmar, he seems like a reasonable person from her perspective, then I remember the will breaker ring and yeah...

Just wondering how a woman from the 10 Kingdoms knows modern Earth slang. Lyra really shouldn't know what an 'asshat' is, unless she's met Earthlings before.

It is easy to think some person is good or bad, if one knows just good or bad things about him. Readers are privileged story observers, usually with better knowledge of things happening in the story than particular characters. Fiona obviously knows nothing about will-breaker rings.

Overall the story is a definate 5 star, but individual chapters need more substance. But please dont go game of thrones and give us a rushed ending.

Find the balance like the best writers!

I’m loving it, I hope Selene finds what she’s needing, I’m glad Sarah is finding out the truth finally, and finally Alana+Racheal <3<3<3. Thanks for sharing!!!!

Simply outstanding Book.... I strongly commend you as an author.. Great pacing...outstanding evolving characters...great internal logic..heck you have me suspending belief to the point that I am seeing magic everywhere. Even better, you are exerting amazing authorial discipline as these threads are woven into a simply exceptional metanarrative that not only hangs together as the tale matures...but leaves us as readers hanging and anxiously awaiting the next installment.

Further, I love how you weave the gospel into the narrative using Illuminar as a foil...simply outstanding writing... I await your next installments with baited breath....

5 stars

I love that story, I really do, but man, do the christian-like gospel bits rub me the very wrong way!

That's the same bullshit that the pedo priests, the terror nurturing imams and all the hate groups that masquerade as churches and temples spew all day long while sheltering the worst of humanity under the umbrella of their sky-daddy.

Fuck all churches and their priests, whatever god they chose sully with their fakeness.

Really boring and lacking heat/eroticism. Shallow characterizations.

With the amount of chapters this book has, the pacing is very slow.

I've been reading thus book for a week now, whe I picked it I thought it was finished Nicely written though...

As much as I love the story it is really slow. Please pick up the pace, less day to day details, and a little more action would be appreciated. A minute to minute description is not necessary to make a great story. If anything it turns a great story into a mediocre one.

It seems reading the 49th chapter of boring series lacking heat/eroticism must be true masochism for some readers. They should search other categories. And spreading universal hate is the religion worse than most others.

Religion makes intelligent people say the dumbest things,the I created everything so I can choose to protect it or not is a slave masters argument and it fallacious

A very good story, very well told. Thank you for sharing your craft with us.

I also appreciate the minimal typos and such. I know that's a compliment by omission to some degree, but it is indeed rare that someone can write with color and descriptive phrasing and without mistakes. Sorry that's not more elegant but I do sincerely appreciate your team's efforts.

ugh more poorly thought-out religious apologetics than anything remotely erotic. Like, I'm invested enough to be reading on, but I'm annoyed and conflicted about it. As an author, you should really ask yourself this question: "Who is my audience?" Then write a story those people would be interested in. Your story is so all-over-the-map that you're apparently trying to write for everyone and end up writing for no one.

Good size chapters that contain so little its an art, you have talent but you really are messing up a story that could be so damned good .

49 chapters in and you tell us its only 60% done . So approx 32 more chapters to go , im sorry but fuck this . I will come back in 3 years and finish this story maybe.