All Comments on 'A Dream Come True'

How cool is it that a little romance and genuine feelings can creep into a pornographic story. Please continue the story I would love to know how they end up. Do they marry? Have a son as she says?

HOT!!! HOT!!! HOT!!! I loved it.

on the verge...of falling.

part two?

thank you-scotchbound (sandd_bound).

healed by a beautiful love. L.A., you do have a real talent for telling a good tale. I thoroughly enjoyed it and am glad I came across it. Don't ever stop telling your stories.

You are indeed one of the best on this site. Thank you for all that you do and have done so well.

Another awesome storey!!!! I love the deep sensuous and nauti way you write. Do not ever stop!! Glad batteries are cheap! yummy...

Wow , that was very hot ! Turned me on

king kong with a big schlong and she is nothing but a cheap and nasty fuck slut whore

That Anonymous of January 8, this year, does not know what or why he is reading, he just wants to criticize. Sounds like a religious fanatic who got lost in the porn section. Thank you for writing.

not even remotely sexy or entertaining...pathetic story line....

well written

LA, you got a good story going on but you left us hangin. Surly you've got another chapter to finish this off? I/m interested in reading it

Very hot and exciting story, I feel there could have been more story with Misty like there had been with Jenna........