All Comments on 'A Dream Come True'

Very hot! Great read. Will have to have a looky at your other stuff!

not sure why this story isn't getting higher ratings? it's well written and hot. must be the anti-pee crowd trashing it. I hate when that happens.

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I thought it was a great story. She needing to pee so badly and him being a bit dictatorial and not letting her go. Finally, she pees in her white panties and it all goes from there.He's inside her cunt and she just gushes out all over his cock, his belly, and stomach.

Hope there are more.

Wassup