All Comments on 'A Dream, In Midsummer'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
AMAZING

The beginning where everything was being repeated was a tad irritating, i understand you were trying to make the character sound unsure and whatnot...

All in all it was a beautiful read, i hope you write plenty more in the future :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
A bit more than superb!

"... and I can't remember a word he said, but it's not important what he said; it's the way it was said that matters. "

dinkymacdinkymacalmost 9 years ago
Very nice!

Thanks for sharing.

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