All Comments on 'A Dream of a Week'

by HunterShambles

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Turtle1952Turtle1952about 7 years ago
fantastic story

just loved it thank you

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Very hot

Robbie is a very lucky guy. He has everything he needs at home.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Stupid dialogue

Try again. Dare you to leave this comment up. Bet you're a pussy ass.

mspervy46mspervy46about 7 years ago
What?

Not a bad story, but the dialog is kind of screwed up, and makes no sense. The sister goes to the hospital and there is no reason stated. I'd love to see the ladies become their joint husband go away somewhere and make them both pregnant.

prop69prop69about 7 years ago
great story...kept my cock hard waiting for the ULTIMATE PENETRATION

Why was Julie in the hospital? That is a pretty big thing to not include. Are you going to continue. Why no mention of penetrating Julie's hymen. Also, didn't she suggest that she had some experience?

Still loved the series.

goldponygoldponyabout 7 years ago
hmmmmm

Think the hospital was about appendix. Think mom is getting sister pregnant...."save it for a special girl" Enjoyed the story, but look for more of their time together. MMMM

how sweet it would be. GP

HunterShamblesHunterShamblesalmost 7 years agoAuthor
Dear Anonymous

Please have the guts to use your name, at least that way I could read your submissions and learn how it's done. Oh never written anything yourself, thought not. if you don't like it then just ignore it. Do not criticise in others what you haven't even attempted yourself. BTW your caps lock is on, careful people might think you're a nutter, shouting in the dark to yourself. I've had better insults than you could ever write. You need a day job so at least you get out more. And less self abuse or you'll go blind.

LegallySaneLegallySaneabout 2 years ago

You should have added pegging to the story tags and I would have passed. Yuk!!!

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