All Comments on 'A Dream of Age & Beauty'

This could easily go in Romance or Mature, but unless there is a Part 2, it is just a very long, well-written TEASE! ;-)

Likable and well-drawn central characters with a predator in the wings waiting to pounce -- please continue this story!

Now I'll just have to go poking around in your other works here, thanks!

Thank you for the compliments. Category is always tough here, as yes, this could properly go into multiple categories. But they make us pick one.

A sequel/part 2 is in progress, which will make the set a 'complete' story. As fast as I can, as the (unfortunate necessity) of my day job allows! I will attempt to meet your expectations.

The characters and writing are wonderful and I am so happy to learn you are working on the next chapter. Thanks for sharing your story here.

Except the parts where you left the English language behind. Afraid I could not understa nd any of your references to whatever they were.

Next time add to the unnecessary blurb at tge start yhat this dtory contains unrecognizable words, expressions and references.

Had to give up during page 1. Shame because the story held promise.

Great story. Loved reading the it hope there is another chapter to come.

I skimmed a few of the later chapters but only cause I'm tired. Fun, fast moving with dialogue like Bogie and Bacall or Cary Grant and Betty Davis in a flick from the golden age of Hollywood.

loved it...learnt three new words, expressions. doesn't happen normally. i love language.

What about the ending/sequel? Its like 3 years.

I feel let down, i thoroughly enjoyed the story but what a stupid ending

AWESOME STORY. A wonderful story and an exciting read. Great plot & characters. Thanks for developing this complex story and plot.