All Comments on 'A Dripping of Butter'

Yet another first class story from one of our top writers

Was a good read except I didn't care for the silly words to describe her cunt and tits and his dick and balls, sounded to me like a little kid writing the story. I prefer rude crude and unrefined words to describe sex acts.Just my opinion. 3 stars due to the silly words

Most people today have no idea how colorful and complex the English language used to be. The current mode is much more simplistic and blunt, catering to the lowest common denominator. We resort to far fewer euphemisms, preferring just plain cock or cunt, losing the rich flavor of earlier eras. However, the similies, metaphors, regional slang, and classical allusions added much to my enjoyment of this tale. Your research was well done!. Bravo!

Interesting premise.

The period slang was a bit distracting.

Needed some more dialog during the sex. Did she like what he was doing to her? Did he like what she was doing to him? Was there something more/different either wanted from the other?

He didn't even touch her asshole?

Four stars.

Nothing better than hot buttered toast with one's afternoon tea , but then to have a nightcap in one's chamber oh! Pure delight, and then yet again afore sun up oh joy of joys. Nothing better for to test ones mettle. A fine rendering of the tale sir. Joy !!

Five stars. Good story and I loved the period slang it brought much to the tale. Well done.