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by Fliccy_sub

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Love the story! I can't wait to find out what is going on. The only criticism I have is for your writing style . You use a lot of run on sentences , where you link what should be 2 or 3 sentences with just commas. I definitely love the story though, so I hope your style continues to improve with practice.

PagephantomPagephantomover 6 years ago
Great

I hadn't noticed, but i hope there is a sequel!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Complex and clever

Difficult to connect the pieces

But we’ll done

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymous4 days ago

Well done. I'm looking forward to other stories by you. Actually, I wish I could be there with you in them. 🫂

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