by PenanceS
Way too short and unbelievable. The second she saw you she was dripping wet and just jumped all over your wife? The story was just too rushed. The women could have been surprised, embarrassed, a little angry? Need to build into it a little more and take time to tell how the women and the guy feel and build into them agreeing to masturbate together.
...this story is ass. All build up, no delivery. I mean... c'mon.