by Bad_Girl_In_Training
Very good story, mums had a good spanking and son has had mother, sounds like dad is going to punish both of them and that might happen in front of his daughter.
The stroy would have been good if the wife had gotten a spanking. But you had to have her beaten to a pulp! I don't hold with hitting women!! The story was supposed to be about incest, but you added in sadism. Sorry, I don't like that!
But you write well, and the story would have been good and I would have read all three chapters. But I won't now.