by Bad_Girl_In_Training
You know if danielle doesnt consent to what daddy does daddy can be sent to prison for rape you know that dont you why not just check the vagina for traces of cum on her to see if she had sex that night.
Atlanta,Ga.
What happens next??? Ihope you are still writing. GIVE US MORE
Look ! This is well written but should be marked as bdsm only. The incest and bdsm do not make good bedfellows. For those who enjoy incest I am sure the mere thought of the two being combined is stomach churning.They read for taboo love and forbidden lust not shock and morbid brutality.You really want to put a twist on the tale? Have the son kick the shit out the dad and save his mom and twin from the psychotic antics of the father.
Just read A Family Affair 1 through 3 and loved it. I liked in particular how you described the conflicting emotions in both mother (loving partner/submissive slut, caring mother/incestuous predator) and daughter (innocent girl/eager slut). The father and son characters are a bit one dimensional, but hey, they're men... I'ld love to see you write part 4 (and 5?).