All Comments on 'A Family Holiday surprise - Ch. 01'

Because nobody who is 58 years old thinks that a 70 year old woman as "old" plus the story generally lacked conviction.

This was on Lit before!!!

This has been on before not sure in which category Mature maybe crap then and still is

5*! Waiting for the 3-some with Penny & the wife for Chapter 2! Will he fuck the grand daughters in Chapter 3? Would the whole family have an orgy in Chapter 4? Do both grand daughters get pregnant in Chapter 5? Sh!t, where will this end?

Is there something different about this version from the original (other than the way you typed the title)? If there was, then you should have stated that in the prologue.