All Comments on 'A Family's Captivity'

i knew it was a fantasy at all times, although I admit I wouldn't mind being part of an action like this. It would be so much fun even though it would be very wrong I admit that, but we can all hope Nd dream even though I know it would never happen at least for me.

But thanks for the story I have just "cum" myself and enjoyed the pleasure therein!!!

Perverted and wrong enough to be titillating without being so over the top that it becomes distracting.

I liked the story, brings up many taboo thoughts. Thanks for exploring. I think yore right on in your depiction of the base responses from the girls and their dad. It's too bad there wasn't more about mom. Please continue and bring mom into focus. Thanks. :-0..pPpPp Annette

I am the same way. I love being forced to submit. From one sub to another, a salute! Oh, excellent story, by the way. I'm not big on the taboo element, but it did the job! Look forward to reading more from you!

A well written taboo fantasy. Thoroughly enjoyable

This story is like viewing an oncoming train wreck in that you know you shouldn't be looking but you just can't turn your eyes away because you have to see what's going to happen.

I came like a rocket when Ashley was forced to clean up her father and sister's juices.

I was so turned on and shot a wod literally across the room. Very intense. Thank you!

Another amazing story from a simply amazing writer.

My first story I have read of yours, but will not be my last

oh you fuckin whore bitch,....im cummmmminnnnn....uh uh uh....you shoulda made the girls clean every cock then each other...Wink..i gave you a five....

you do fantastic work just great!!!

Can you do part two to this story when wife gets back after her release. :)

You are a very creative writer, with the ability to arouse your reader.

Great story!! Very well written, I enjoyed the the fact that right amount of detail and description was used that provided me with an immersive world to imagine while I was reading it. I look forward to future writings.

I second the hope of a second installment. Maybe something like "A Families Captivity: TNG" or 2.0. The basis being that after the ordeal the healed together and grew stronger relationship bounds (not immorally or unethically) had and raised their babies, life moved on until the experience was just a faded dream...that is until Joquan's, Diego's, and Gurrero's own sons, and or daughters, paid them a visit to have some fun of their own.

I’d love the other guys to bring the mom and slap the husband around but then 9 guys triple oenetration on all three women then make dad clean them all with his tongue before fucking a daughter over moms face, etc etc

I'd love to read a sequel to this story! Dad gets loose and instead of freeing the girls he fucks their asses/ Dad doesn't pay his debts, hoping that he'll have to pay up again in the same way/ Or Tracie hires the men to come back and abuse the whole family again...

This took a bunch of my fantasies and brought them to life on the page. How I’d love to be one of those daughters. Love your creativity and your writing style.

Great story. Loved the plot, characters, details of the sex.

You are so descriptive in your details - it is a great sexual pleasure to read of them. This is the first of your stories that I have read, but I will be reading more and more, - and I am an 81 year old single male who has never married - what fun I have missed out on! But never mind with my dick stiff and pre-cum beginning to leak out I am really enjoying some sexual pleasure in this fanciful account. Thank fir giving an old man some sexual pleasure at long last!

Leo - Brisbane, Australia.

Rubbed my clit and shame-came to this so hard. Thank you for putting such disgusting thoughts in my mind and reminding me of my humiliating desires <3

We need a part two to know if ashley & tracie become Joquan's sex slaves or not

been ok if the bad guy had wound up dead but as it was i guess if that turns the writer on he must have a problem that i would nt want

It would help if the wife’s abduction was part of the story

GK, you are a true artist! I wish you were writing for a major porn house.

As good as Princess Donna's best.

I loved the part about dad being tied to the char, getting shamefully hard watching his daughters get fucked. And then being forced to allow his daughter to suck his cock!

That, was so sexy!

I would love to be in a similar predicament... fantasy, of course ;-) watching my beautiful bride/girlfriend/s/wifewhoresluts getting the shit fucked out of them, and then forced to suck my hardening cock off, by their evil pleasure-givers!

I hope you do more work employing this theme!

One of the things that makes your writing truly great is how the "victims" are forced to give themselves over to their primal-pleasures/natures over and over again, without mercy!

This type of content without explosive female pleasures is almost not worth producing... As with filmed porn.

Thank you again for all your "hard" work!

You are the author of the next 50 Shades level phenomenon, for sure!

hot and horny incestous sex between daddy and his daughters ,love it cunt words,thank you.

sexy with daughter riding father but wanted sister to lick her out afterwards

dad and daughter was very sexy just want him to suck their tits also

I loved this story. it is my favorite story on Literotica! My fantasy would be my best friend's daughters (the same age as mine 15 and 18, I realize the rules don't allow this) are paired up with me, and my girls are with him. The bad guys don't know who belongs to whom. Your story is the best!

daughters with a strap on would have been priceless.

extremely hot

Amazing story, my wife and I are pretty adventurous when it comes to sex,we've told each other our fantasies and mine was to have our house broken into by a group of men and they force me to watch them fucking my wife, we've actually role played the whole thing it was incredible

totally turned on

definitely need more. maybe the wife returns and gets upset and leaves after awhile. but dad and daughters carry on their new life

GK how do I get in touch in with you. I have a story idea and only you can do justice to it