by Brownmonkey_69
Nice sexy story but not too sure of your use of the word "dilgent" seems wrong to me
She is almost a good little slut for Daddy. She needs to learn to suck Daddy clean after he has dumped his load in her tight little cunt.
The writer needs an editor and the reader needs a finely honed suspension of disbelief ability.
"The writer needs an editor and the reader needs a finely honed suspension of disbelief ability."
I couldn't' have put it better myself, this story is a load of childish garbage. Please don't write any more.
Kinda lost me at the huge tits and 9 inch cock. Oh, 9.1, actually. Must be super proud of that extra .1 inch. Would have been much better story with believable body dimensions.