All Comments on 'A Father's Justice Pt. 05'

This may be my third time reading this story and each time is exciting. Thank you very much for writing.

Damn I love this story no matter how many times I read it! Another 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Great story

Now this is a story! The writing is good but the writing style is even better. Corporate assholes and hired muscle are no match for experienced, battle-hardened soldiers. Of course, in real life, this type of operation wouldn’t go so smoothly. And there are a few technical, fine points. Just one example: A Huey would be “stretching it” to have the range. After all, Ryan doesn’t have a cache of jet fuel at his home, so the helicopter (powered by one or two turbine engines, depending on the model) would have already burned up some fuel just getting to Ryan’s home. The bad guys were 2.5 hours’ drive going the speed limit, one assumes, so about 150 miles, maybe a bit more. A Huey has a range of 308 miles, assuming auxiliary tanks were not fitted, so there would be some range anxiety getting back to Ryan’s place. Still, it’s just a story, so technical details can be stretched. Obviously the evil oil company board deserved what happened to them in terms of “Devine Justice.” Five stars — no wimps here!

Truly terrible. At least the republican scum oil tycoons got their just deserts.

Wonderful.

Love this part most! 5 BIG ASS FUCKING HUGE FLAMING NOVA STARS!

Great chapter once again. And very nicely written fightscene.

The egg lady was fucking annoying. Guess she didn't want Mr moneybags dying on her.

Great story. Thanks for your writing,

Loved it.

I loved this chapter, and give it 5 big stars. The son-in-law comes good to the proud dad, and he makes an "honest woman" out of Beverly (asking her to marry him) all in the same night. I like that agent Smith gets to investigate the "crime scene" he was part of. :-) Thanks for sharing this story with us, as I enjoyed the hell out of it.