All Comments on 'A Father's Justice Pt. 07'

There is nothing to compare to your mention: ""An eye for an eye. Isn't that what the good book says?" so fitting. A truly well deserved 5 STARS.

Glad to see Justice O Peace could make an appearance. Can’t wait to see what comes out your universe next.

Great story. Whether truth or fiction I love it when the good guys win !!!

and put her to bed about as well as I've ever heard a story done. Sometimes your stories tend to ramble or rush a little, but not this one. This one is clear, concise, well-paced, to the point, and ended right where it began.

Extremely well done, sir.

I to pay my complements on your story. It has cost be several hours of sleep because I had to finish it. You write well and develop your characters great. I must say it was hard to predict how you bent the story around to keep it interesting. Unfortunately it don't think it could happen in the real world because all the people were able to turn a blind eye to justice. I would hope in a case like this they would. Will lookout for more of your work

An excellent series with an excellent ending. Thank you for sharing! 5*

A truly captivating series, I am so glad I waited until it was all available to start reading it - as the various cliffhangers would have driven me mental.

Thank you for sharing this with us.

5/5

As always you write a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing your creative talents with us. This story has been a pleasure to read. I eagerly look forward to your next offering for our reading indulgence.

Keep Up The Great Literary Work ! ! !

Simply put this was just a great story. Congratulations, and keep writing.

Great read very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.

Couldn’t wait for the next submission.

An excellent reading experience, great characters and plot development. You can't ask for anything more. Cheers

Excellent story!

A ripping yarn and one of the best, neatly crafted tales I have enjoyed in a long while. I'm a fan of your universe, so please keep on with what you are doing, I'm looking forward to your next. Time to discover 'Justice', thanks for the tip.

Another great series, I hated to see it end. Loved the characters!

Great story!!

However, I would've liked to know more about what Lisa really knew about the illigal affairs of Knight.

I find the cameo of Ranger Justice good.

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Only 5 because there isn’t a score of 10,000

This is an excellent story, detailed and well written. I loved it! Brought a tear to my eyes more than once. Well done!

are wound together thru the ages and occasionally cross over into our modern times while continuing to crop up. TK U MLJ LV NV

....and an appearance from Justice O Peace!

Sincere thanks for your efforts, which get to be enjoyed by us.

I've looked forward to each chapter being released and enjoyed reading every page. Truth be told the ending made me cry. Happy, not sad tears.

To the author, I hope you keep writing, you mix a great story and sex in a good balance.

Thank you. What a great story.

I had trouble with the first of your stories which I read. Then I decided to read them as if they were graphic novels, but without the pictures. At that point I started to really enjoy them, this one included.

A little bit of magic is cool. I liked the cap & ball pistola!

5*

An excellent tale. Loved it from start to finish.

I'm only sad that the story is finished. Well done.

And having Justice O Peace show up.was a triumph! I was a bit confused when Agent Smith asks Ryan about how he did the raid,since he was there,but I realized that Russell didn't know Smith was in on it. Satisfying take, Lisa was done in by her own stupidity.

Another great read from you! I love your “over the top” approach to to your writing! Do not stop writing these, please. I look forward to your next story. 5 stars!

Damn Man, what was not to like. A great story told very well. It is the kind of story that I look for in books that I purchase. Please let me know if you ever offer books on the open market. FIVE plus. Thanks for sharing.

Back in Chapter 4, Beverly had a son, Jason, in the Naval Academy. Unless I missed it, he just sort of disappeared from the story and wasn't notified of the engagement and didn't show up for the wedding. Were they estranged?

good story,kept your interest,realistic and not over the top to make it unbelievable. i could have read another 5 chapters easely. good stories as great movies take time to tell

@looking4it

So, why did Justice have to make an appearance?

Texas, Texas Ranger, .....get it?

Another great story, 5/5. Thank you

Might have been fun to have JOP, and the Sheik meet at the wedding.

MAYBE THE AUTHOR SHOULD KEEP THIS STORY GOING WITH A SECOND STORYLINE THAT CONTINUES A FEW YEARS LATER.

Well, as I started Pt. 1 this morning, I wondered how you were going to fill seven parts of multiple pages without getting slogged down - but by gum - you did it. I spent a good part of my day enjoying this great tale. Thanks for the entertaining characters and story. A great 5 star feature.

Another fine one. Loved Ranger Justice showing up!

A touch of humor to a serious tale that made me smile as I read the series. Always looking for your new work as I know I will enjoy it. Although over the top the street shootout ending somehow seemed fitting to end this tale. Well done.

However there is a Hard Rock, Arizona

I really like the Story. Yes it is small part fantasy.

I gave him a rating of 5

A follow up series/new storyline would be great. I really liked the characters and could read more.

I started reading this story around 10 pm at night I finished it at 5 pm the next day I took my time yes and could not sleep till I finished it As I said it was Epic story Saddletramp 1956 Meet Graywolf 1954 (that is Me) You are one of the best writers I have found online keep up the good work!

... when he went clothes shopping without Bev!

No matter how close, a wife/fiancée always wants input (at a minimum) regarding her man’s wardrobe.

— Rock Jock

Thanks. this was very well done. I could have read this forever.

a very well thought out story with a lot of details involved

Excellent story

Most enjoyable series well deserving of 5* rating.

You sure can write 'em,; My wife is gonna sue for alienation of affection, I spent so much time reading this story.9 stars cause by now, lots of people know I can't count. But I believe a story should get what it deserves. The Bear approves. Now I expect to see a Huey in every one of your stories from now on. A nd get some air to surface missiles for the next one.

The BEAR

Great series!!!

This is one of the best stories I have read on here, well keep up the good work.

Long but, a great! This story had to be long to cover that many details.

Now this is a story!!! It was so easy to get caught up in. Reminded me of the Longmire serie, I watched recently Thank you for such a great story. Thank you very much.

I’m disappointed that this series had to end. Now I have to find the Justice stories which should prove as interesting as this story line.

Excellent story! Hopefully Jake's other children get something as well.

One of the best writers on this site. Hands down hallelujah.

Now to meet 'Justice'.

re: Gunblade's comment; I began hearing Sam Elliot's voice in my head by the end of the first chapter.

loved the story! could have been a little more graffic/descriptive, but a great read. imho: Ya' done good! kzchopper@hotmail

I love a good story, not everything has to be burn the bitch, thanks

A great story, wonderful characters, very entertaining.

Thank-you!

Something to taste. Cheaters are needed to be punished. Best Story I read.

Loved it from start to finish. Thank you for the excellent read.

Excellent job creating the plot and writing the story. I enjoyed it a great deal.

In this chapter only one thing didn’t fit, and it’s minor: the rice thrown at the wedding. It’s a character consistency issue. Paper confetti or bird seed are used because dried rice expands in a bird’s stomach, often killing the bird. In this story: (a) he bride keeps chickens; and (b) the maid of honor is a veterinarian. Both would make an issue of the rice.

I just remembered tge exact but very qualified story and doesn't end meaningless.......

Wow!! What a thrill ride! Someone needs to make a movie or TV series out of this series. Well done @Saddletramp1956! Looking forward to enjoying more of your work. Just wonderful.

I agree a movie should be made

What a wonderful adventure, this story really covers it all, what a drama. I loved how this tale unfolded showing how Ryan had his entire life torn away from him to finally having his revenge(a fathers justice) and getting his happily ever after. Lisa in the got exactly what she deserved as well as all of the other Knight cronies.

Well Done, 5 stars.

What can I possibly add to the praise already heaped on the author and his story!

A wonderful tale, well put togther and beautifully written as usual. It kept me up. 5 Stars.

I guess I'm in the minority... No pun intended... But way too over the top for me... Instead of learning to be a great writer... Youve learned what buttons to push to get good ratings... Youve learned that if you hit on certain aspects... Certain segments of the population will love your work... Larry the cable guy is a mediocre commedian but he's got a following among a certain segment...

Your black hats consistently do things that make no sense... And all of your white hats are in the john wayne mold... (So i killed 1000 indians... Im still a white hat cause I'm a real man's man... And besides we needed the land)...

As long as you write tales where the man's man gets revenge and is not a cuckold... And winds up with a hot babe... This crowd will think it's great... Pity... Cause you have ability to accomplish much more... As always... jmo

Btw... Having been in the marines doesn't make one some kind of miraculous fighting machine to be feared... I fought and beat several when i was in the navy... They're just guys...

-jaye-

No point in saying too much. I enjoyed it and thought it was well done generally.

That was a captivating wild ride from start to finish, and the characters developed nicely throughout. Have you ever looked into having some of your writings published?

I enjoyed that whole series thoroughly, and would not disappointed in the least if you turned this into a whole succession of books.

I really enjoyed this series. I thought it was well written.

Well crafted, a true page turner as they say. Really enjoyed the characters, the plot flowed very well, just a really good story. Really enjoy your work. Thank you for sharing your hard work. Nice job!!!

JJ1

It's interesting that you made Shiekh Abdullah a good guy this time, he blew up in a boat the last time I saw him in one of your stories.

Good story, lots of action which I like! I like sex scenes with a little romance. Back a couple chapters when they were on the porch and she drops her shorts and gets nude and the they just go at it and they barely knew each other was a bit much. Other than that one scene, well done!

Best story I have read on this site

Truly amazing. I think this is the best story I have read on this site.

another winner , makes me proud to being a Vetern , American and a Friend to Justice . My God and all good Men watch over those in need .

This was a great story to read, and surprisingly it was set on my backyard, El Paso, Texas, New Mexico, HW62, Chihuahua. Excellent work!

Incredible story of betrayal, love, and redemption. It may be one of the best I’ve seen. This one is movie worthy, it’s that good.

I pictured Ryan as Clint Eastwood with an eye patch throughout this story. The gristled war veteran with a sketchy past, a sarcastic baritone voice, and who wears cowboy hats. The gravitas you gave to the character was fantastic. Every side character was also really good, particularly FBI Agent Smith and the son-in-law, Bob. They were well developed with a wide range of emotion.

Stories like this are why I continue reading here.

I e helluva lot of fun

This was a fantastic and entertaining story. As to the author's appologies about accuracy, it is fiction and all bits added to the entertainment (real or imagined). Thanks to the author for his time in crafting this story.

The only thing that detracted from the story was that hokey bit with J.O.P., the Texas Ranger, and his clip clop sound effects. Ignoring my gag reflex to that, it was a great story.

This was a very enjoyable read from start to finish. Thanks for sharing it with us!

Great story really enjoyed it especially as the good guys came out on top, I will now be reading all the rest of your stories on Literotica thank you very much

fives all the way thru. kept waiting to hear ryan and/or the sheikh had shorted Knight oil stock.

Very good story. Enjoyed it very much.

Well written & very interesting. Tha entire series has been quite well done. I look forward to more you.

L read it ALL. It should be made into a Movie. THANKYOU VERY MUCH.

A good entertainer. It felt like a movie.

I really enjoyed the story. It was well thought out and well written. I can only remember one mistake in the story where Ryan was called Jake. Thanks Saddletramp for an interesting story that was well crafted.

WOW, AN EXCELLENT STORY FTOM START TO END.

2nd reading and still think it's a good well written story in 7 chapters and still 5* rating deserved

Tramp as always you are the best.

Nam Vet

Another Saddletramp winner

A real masterpiece! You pulled out all the stops and set off real fireworks. Your protagonists were very convincing and believable! I soaked up this story like a sponge the water. Thanks for an excellent entertainment!

great story. Brilliant read

Tramp

Great storytelling in a way not often found. Yes sappy love story yes far fetched conspiracy yes a good ol boy vibe. But most of all YES a masterpiece of enjoyment.

And for the record from someone with experience in the middle east “

Both the greeting and the response “As-salaam alykum," were on the mark

Compelling. I couldn't stop reading til I had read it all. As good or better than anything I have read on this website. Eleven Stars!!!

Leave cynicism at the door; suspend disbelief and let yourself be entertained!

GREAT STORYTELLING.

As good as I've read on this site. Well done!!!!

Oh my goodness that was great,great read.

Excellent story, loved it!

Thanks it was a great read.