All Comments on 'A Father's Love Ch. 03'

by RichardBlake

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Too short....

....want to see this carried to the extreme before I die!-pistolpackinpete

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
He needs to quit fooling around and fuck her

He has her blowing him, she didn't need to jack him off, she should have fucked her dad. He should have put his cock in her sweet little pussy, broke her cherry, and shot a load of cum deep in her womb. Why did he have her go into the other room to change clothes, she should have done in front of him. She needs to feel comfortable being naked in front of him, and displaying her tits and pussy to him. She wants to please her dad, and she wants to use her body to make him love her in a special way. She knows that what she is doing is wrong, but she wants dad so bad she doesn't care.Dad needs to train her every night on making her his little fuck slut. Good story and I hope to see the next chapter soon.....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

Deliciously demented!

Dan and JennyDan and Jennyabout 13 years ago
Wish there was more...

After reading the series, i can't help but wish the story continued still.... will u be writing more?

You are great with ur words, and letting ur story come alive in my mind.

Thank you for this series...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

where is the rest of this? please write more!! made me so horny. i love that the father is controlling and a bit cruel. makes me very horny.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
hurry up

this is too good

bookslut3bookslut3over 11 years ago
more please.

Are you writing more? Who's in the window watching?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
more

Really like this story, what is next?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
oh, you are an evil, evil man

With an evil, evil mind that has gotten me so wet. Shameful. Nice story, Mr. RichardBlake, hope you are able to add to it.

Sly

white_lacewhite_lacealmost 7 years ago
want to see this carried to the extreme

please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please update!!

Really good so far, hope you updated if you still exist

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