All Comments on 'A Father's Story'

by bmunchausen

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Wonderful

What a wonderful story. So full of love and fgeelings. I want to read more about the Matson Family. What a group!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Enough

I have enjoyed reading this series of stories. However, I think that you have gotten to the point where even you don't remember when which girl had sex

with the main character. For example, I have noticed contradictions in your story line concerning who was Sally's father, and when Debby first mated with her Dad.

Good story . . . enjoyable reading . . . time to start another story.

LadyOfAusLadyOfAusover 13 years ago
Brilliant

Brilliant 3-part story, loved every minute of it even with some spelling mistakes.

TechRaiderTechRaideralmost 13 years ago
go for it dude!

i kind of enjoy this little series, its nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I cried!

Tragic romances, family reunions, and lots & lots of love - this story made me so happy I cried, definitely not what I expected from an erotic story, and yet it's still definitely got its moments of hotness that make it deserve the title 'erotic'.

TalonsreachTalonsreachover 12 years ago
Nice series

Soo...How will Freddy Jr. fit into all this? Surely you are not going to leave him out in the cold are you? Please don't kill Terry Sr. off early to accommodate it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
please continue

Ur stories are awsome an I ussually can't put them down once I start. Please continue writting!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Man, oh, man!

This is (literally) one fucked-up family! Makes the old song "I'm my own grandpa" sound pretty normal. Personally, I found it overdone. No family could be that inbred without producing some idiots or some people with twelve fingers and toes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Written by a psychotic incompetent whom live vicariously on its deranged perversions !

One of the worst! 1* .

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Can't wait to read more, please hurry

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
keep up the good work

cant wait keep up the good work love the story

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Wow, one big happy family. Can't wait to see what's next. Well done 5 stars

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