All Comments on 'A Favor for a Friend'

We'll hear more from this sexy threesome. Good job!

Great story!

I really liked the husband initiating the conversation, giving explicit permission, and then providing instructions. Very hot.

"My *friend's* wife", surely?

Well-written, with solid description, believable development and good dialogue. Look forward to reading more of your stories in the near future.

Definately think another chapter of this is in order. Describing the month before Jason leaves.

Suggestions include Jason moving in. Hubby being cut off while Jason takes the master bedroom and enjoys full access until he leaves.

Subsequent chapters could be about Jason going to a Caribbean island for a month on vacation and the wife goes and stays with him the entire time.

You started a wicked timeline with lots of options.. Nice work!!

I liked this story. There was a few spelling and grammatical mistakes here and there which should prompt you to check more thoroughly next time. Other than that it was well structured with almost visible characters in your mind. Keep it up.

It's "semper paratus" with an "a" not an "e".

Believable and well paced. But there are a few typos that detract from the overall effect. So, 4 instead of 5.

Interesting first story. Seems to me, after finishing dictation, run a spell checker program to pick up unnecessary errors. Thanks for the story.