by ghost12_spirit
... Speak louder than words ! Im amazed that you were able to write such an erotic suspense short without any character dialog , and make it work , but you did , and you did it very well ! I felt anticipation and kinship with your characters and knew nothing about them . From now on you’ll have me at ‘hello’ !
Wow! You have articulated all the action with such ease. Bravo, work of a genius…
With your erotic stories and your God gifted abilities to articulate them so simply, yet so forcefully, I am able to drive the erotic pleasure and oozing of my love juices without experiencing actual sex with an actual sex partner. You are indeed gifted with words.
Loved it. If you make love as well as your stories, I'd love to be your man for just one night.