All Comments on 'A Fine Substitute'

I look forward to when you put another story here. They have always been good. Thanks.

Awesome score of 10

Wouldn't it be funny if Nat came home early, while Vince is still in the shower?

Want more of this story line

great story. excellent detail. great tits !

As good as anything I've read lately. ... Keep up the good work.

As a story purely of an afternoon delight you get high marks. However, to get a higher star from me it needs more story line and less sex.

Thanks for sharing your effort and hope to see more of it.

I loved the story line and characters. More adventures with both would be interesting since the daughter told the mom to get laid.

By a fine writer. I love the teacher character. She has real potential. Thanks for sharing your talent.

The possibilities of this storyline are endless. Good work.

real possibilities for sure continue this series in this same fast paced and exciting sex.

E8C2

Awesome

A great story with some character development, but mostly about getting your rocks off. Good job!

need a chapter 2! Badly! PLease!!!

Hot!

have done sisters, separately, but never mom and daughter, not that I didn't contemplate back in my school days-some very hot milfs.

Five stars.

Thanks for sharing.

Young guy, mature voluptuous woman, pls say there's more of this...

Loved her massive and continuous orgasms.

wish my substitute teacher was like that

This deserves one or more chapters maybe daughter and mom!

You should not deny Vincent a private tutorial from Ms. White in another venue, a hotel possibly a classroom or even tagged team at Vincent's apartment. This storyline is much to interesting for just one experience.

Thanks for sharing this very entertaining read.

Bloody fantastic, what a great story what super characters and so many great descriptions of some super sex, wish this was going to be a series.

Excellent story. Would love a second chapter when he gets double teamed by mother & daughter.

How about Mrs White taking control of her daughter, and conducting an anatomy class on both her kids in class? High marks for the sex --room for more plot.

More please

Excellent, plot and writing, most enjoyable read.

MARVELLOUS! Areal tour de force. Imaginative and stretching yet still within sight of believable. Thanks so much

It was kinky and outright, I enjoyed it a lot. Maybe a sequel could be nice...

very good good pace

Great story. Ms White needs to give her ass to Vince. Maybe have Ms White and her daughter get together with Vince.

It is ashame you have not written a sequel to this storyline.

Maybe Ms White does do it in class over her desk by 2 different former students.

hott!...

Vince only comes once.....

Best line of story: "Her high-beams were on, and they burned straight through the fog of surprise in my head."

and they held up quite well.

Greatest story I have read in a long time

Oh-So-Well-Done!

Great fun read. Looking forward to the threesome.

Outstanding story, great characters. Wonderful read.

What was I expecting?

But it didn’t happen?

Layer that night Natalie returns, Vince returns.

And Natalie smiles at her mom, tilts her head and asks, “So, mom. As good as I told you?”

Loved it, I thought you wrote this so well, a great plot, good characters and so well described sex, really good. I think a second part might not be quite so well received from a lot of readers.

cool mom...should think intimacy of his cock in her cunt allows him to call her by her first name, not Ms White, just not around daughter...