All Comments on 'A First Date'

Very enjoyable and erotic story. I liked it a lot.

The size of her breasts, firmness of her butt, and whether she's curvy has absolutely no bearing on the story. Instead of feeding the reader irrelevant information as if they were sports stats, let the reader use their imagination and fill in the blanks themselves. Also, not sure if you're aware of this, but a bra size of 38B indicates a very wide ribcage (usually due to being overweight) and a small-medium breast size. They're not huge knockers, if that's what you're going for.

You told us twice in the same paragraph that he definitely had a sense of humor. Once is enough.

They're having sex on the first date. Where are the condoms?

Otherwise well-written.