All Comments on 'A First Date & What Could Have Been'

One of the best I have read. Short, suspenseful, and well written. Having played (amature) baseball when younger and loved all my life (78 now), I was able to really get into the story. Had the good luck to catch some really great young pitchers who made into professional baseball. Hope you write some more. 5*

Really good story. But do y'all's tongues actually dance here on Literotica?

****Nice entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

You write well, and the story has merit.

Looking forward to more of your work.

Thanks,

lector77

I'm a sucker for baseball stories and this didn't disappoint, Nice job,

Follow up story, PLEASE.

Beautiful intro for a couple of promising characters. Please continue.

Thank you, enjoyed that

Terrific! More please - and soon...

Needs a quick edit, there are plenty of editors available here to help! My writing has improved a lot since using them. Altogether a good story though, 4 stars! :)