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Click hereJeanie and I went over and introduced ourselves to the limo driver, Steve. He was a middle-aged guy but he was really cool. I was afraid we'd have the "hardass jerk" kind of guy, yelling at us for being a bunch of snot-nosed teenagers just looking to cause trouble.
After we introduced ourselves to Steve, there was a moment when Jeanie and I were alone. The other parents and the other couples were all talking and laughing, when Jeanie and I found ourselves off to the side alone momentarily. I took the opportunity to whisper to her, "You really look breathtaking, Giana."
"Thank you, James," she whispered back, "you look very handsome yourself." I put my arm around her and rubbed her arm affectionately. She smiled, but then a wicked little grin played across her lips and she chuckled.
"What?" I asked suspiciously. "What's so funny?"
"Well... you don't even know the best part yet," she said intriguingly.
"So..." I needled, "what is the best part?" I raised my eyebrows curiously to play along with her.
Ever so slowly she leaned in toward me, pulling me down close to her, and putting her mouth to my ear to tell me a secret. She cupped her hand over her mouth, her breath warm against my ear and neck, and she whispered breathily, "I'm not wearing any underwear."
Then, very lightly, and very quickly, she licked my earlobe. It was tantalizingly soft and incredibly alluring. She then stepped away to join the group, grinning wickedly back at me and grabbing my wrist, pulling me along with her.
Good lord, what did this evening have in store for me? I felt my heart quicken, and a tiny little stirring began in my pants. I might as well admit it, I thought; I was attracted to her. No, it was more than that. I wanted her. I wanted her so badly I could taste it. But I couldn't have her. She was my best friend's little sister. It was wrong, so wrong. I had promised him that I wouldn't touch her. Yet here she was, so gorgeous, so sweet, so irresistible. What the hell was I going to do?
I watched the way her dress clung to her body in the breeze. I watched the way it softly suggested its way into her crevices, knowing there was nothing beneath it. Knowing that the fabric was clinging directly to her body in its most secret, most beguiling areas. And I could smell her, the soft, sweet perfume dancing on the breeze. It was intoxicating. She was so lovely, so perfect in that moment; her smile bright and wide and fascinating.
I was definitely in trouble. It was going to be a long night.
Vivid scene-setting, believable characters and dialogue and a nice build-up of tension.
Great start! Left me wanting more. One if the best stories I've read here, that contained no actual sex. The use of anticipation is amazing!
You have an excellent job reeling me and and making me interested, wondering what will happen next.
Im with rightbank, he totally misinterpreted his buddys comments. What I got out of that was that brother doesnt want any guy, ever,so much as looking at his sisters ass, much less touching her, but if its gotta be someone then it might as well be my buddy, who I know is a good guy and has always been nice to her, just dont fuck it up or Ill beat your ass into next week ;)
Of course James just has the 'dont date my sister cause your my buddy' code stuck in his head, so he never even listened, heh.
She so owns his ass, he might as well start picking out names for the kids ;)
James got the message from his friend wrong. It was not, don't touch her even with even one finger.
It was ""You're the love 'em and leave 'em type. And you better not pull that shit with my sister, man."
I read that to mean, If you love her don't hurt her by leaving her. Respect her feelings and love her back as much as she loves you.
or else.
at least that is where I hope this is going.
I knew a girl in high school a lot like Jeanie, sweet to a complete nerd like me, and a lovely, dark-eyed cheerleader, no less. Oh, those Italian beauties! My problem wasn't her brother, it was her huge, football player boyfriend, who didn't care if she took pity on some dweeb like me and danced with him at a school dance (fast) but made it clear if any other guy touched her, he'd squash us like bugs. Saw her at our 30 year high school reunion in 2010. Still smokin'. Would have SO been worth the beating.