All Comments on 'A First, My Friend's Sister Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Awesome

Awesome thank you for keeping the story going

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Please don't make us wait so long again .....

Love the continuation - reminds me somewhat of my first love ..... and brings back happy memories. Please continue!!!

xxx_willow_xxxxxx_willow_xxxover 11 years ago
5 stars

another awesome write up, can't wait to read the rest......

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Terrific

Keep on writing. Can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nicely done

I've been waiting for the "Tony finds out" fun from the beginning. Gonna be fun.

Thank you.

Jonny_BluelineJonny_Bluelineover 11 years ago
C'mon! Where's Chapter 5?

This is a great story. I hope you can put another few chapters together before long.

myassisdraginmyassisdraginabout 11 years ago
Please end the suspense...

Does Tony get real upset with Jim, does Jeanies dad aprove??????

Please kind author add some more chapters we your loyal readers want to know and the sooner the better. VBG

funksofunksoabout 11 years ago
Such a sweet story

I love how romantic this story is and would love to hear more. I didn't notice this chapter because of it being in a different area I don't check as much but I've found the whole tale to be excellent and the whole thing makes my heart ache a little.

I hope these kids keep going on fine, and as for the less sex comment? dude, you crazy.

dairetodairetoover 10 years ago
Very very sweet story

Just love it

rightbankrightbankabout 10 years ago
these chapters

deserve to be in the Romance section.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Absolutely fucking fantastic, so hot I shot my load twice reading this. Cunt crazed fucker Lanc’s U.K.

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