All Comments on 'A Flight to Remember'

by othbndy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wonderful

As many times as I've been stranded, I'd love this to happen to me.

Thomas DrablézienThomas Drablézienover 11 years ago
Good but .....

I enjoyed your story but felt that the dialogue was rather stilted.

Somehow it seemed to lack passion and was more a description of an enjoyable, but routine, fuck than a night of unbridled lust.

Then again perhaps I am just so jaded....

Worth 4* anyway.

othbndyothbndyover 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the feedback Thomas

Thanks for the feedback, I'll try to get more passion, emotion, and feeling into the next story.

subwhore60subwhore60over 11 years ago

a little long to start, but overall very enticing & yes, i would enjoy this happening to me also!

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