by othbndy
As many times as I've been stranded, I'd love this to happen to me.
I enjoyed your story but felt that the dialogue was rather stilted.
Somehow it seemed to lack passion and was more a description of an enjoyable, but routine, fuck than a night of unbridled lust.
Then again perhaps I am just so jaded....
Worth 4* anyway.
Thanks for the feedback, I'll try to get more passion, emotion, and feeling into the next story.
a little long to start, but overall very enticing & yes, i would enjoy this happening to me also!