All Comments on 'A Flower in the Wilderness'

I LOVED IT! GREAT JOB!

Lovely story which was well written.

Thank you Moondrift for a very nice read!

It does touch somewhat on the hypocrysy of the Church and the problems people who 'don't fit' experience.

Thanks

John

This story seemed to have been told about real people. Your characters were developed so well that your conclusion could not have gone any other way. Thank you for have written another fine story.

Celeste turned me off. She acted like a total bitch; expecting Adrian to be telepathic when she refused to talk about any detail of her marriage.

Barring that, great lead up. Zero payoff, as it were, but not all stories need that anyway.

Not one of your best, but still well worth a read

talk about being up shit creek without a paddle but in the end they - he - got there.....

Thank you.

and he at least rescued her from a loveless marriage and she found her mate....loved it...rolled along at a steady pace....

Not a bad little storyline but for me your ending finished too abruptly but there again so do many of your other stories. Must be your trade mark. . 4 stars.

This is a loving (cheating) wife story, not a romance! It doesn't matter that her husband is ok with this affair. It just makes the husband a cuckold.

Lovely.

Your never mentioned Tom Roberts - the greatest Oz painter - without doubt - mainly landscapes.

5*

VBR / 19pvc44

A VERY ENJOYABLE READ.

THANK YOU !

Very well written. I really like your writing style, one of the best I have read on literotica.

I have just created my first story. I would love for you to read it and let me know your thoughts and critique.

(A Tale of Two Wives 001)

granoldad

Nice story but it would have been better if you had made the story longer and explored more of their relationship. Nevertheless its worth 5*.