All Comments on 'A Fool Stumbles Into Love Ch. 05'

“so that she was lying prone on her back”

At the risk of being labeled a grammar Nazi, “lying prone” means lying on your stomach, not on your back.

“she was just as self-absorbed, boring, and narcissistic as her disappointing friend Sandy, but at least, she prided herself on knowing it”

I’m a bit torn – Is it worse to be mean when you know it is the wrong thing to do, or is it worse to be mean and be PROUD of it, like it’s a good thing to do?

Maureen was so worried about the scars on her legs, then when she and Cal made love, I BELIEVE without her stockings, NOTHING was said?

I understand that Cal would be accepting, but still, wouldn't there at least be a mention?

You've outdone most authors in here. So far this is one of my top 3 stories.