All Comments on 'A Fool Stumbles Into Love Ch. 06'

You turned it into a beautiful story.

“Maureen could see her daughter was tired and obviously preoccupied, certainly about the young man who'd just left, but she still needed to talk.”

Hum, I think you meant to say “Andrea”!

how do you know when a story is Fckin Awesome..???

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when the critics have only the smallest of typo's and errors to complain about !!!

It makes for nice drama, but why keep their past relationship a secret for so long?

Why does Maureen keep wanting to embarrass Cal publicly?

I found all the melodrama about her being injured as a kid and knowing Cal beforehand a bit overdone. Why would her mother keep that from her? Why would Maureen even think about keeping it secret from Cal?

"Guess what, Cal! We knew each other as kids, we were best friends! You helped me recover when I broke my legs! Isn't that wonderful?"

"Broken legs?! I can't believe it! Get away from me!"

... when mom revealed Maureen's aches and pains, and Prince Cal.

A strong 4.5-stars here.