All Comments on 'A Fool Stumbles Into Love Ch. 07'

I check this site daily because I have really enjoyed reading this story and have loved all the twists and turns it has taken so far. I look forward to reading more.

Thank you

I have been enjoying this story as it has progressed, but I haven't voted because I feel the necessity to wait until it is finished.

You're all over the place with the interaction between Cal and maureen, it seems so fake and forced. I just don't understand why she acts the way she does around cal, one second she's hot the next she's an emotional mess who locks him outside naked for no reason. This story is jumping all over the place with maureen's hot and cold attitude and cals constant wristcutting personality ruining the romance. They've passed the hardest part yet them seem to be more stangers who fuck then long lost loves. I enjoy this series but feel you've fallen away from the greet writing and plot of earlier chapters to just put out chapters.

To anonymous. I'm sure you'll never read this but; Cal and Maureen are very young, they both have troubled pasts, and they both are still searching. They're searching for their identities, searching for some constancy, and they're searching for that special someone. Cal's no wrist cutter; he's just insecure, uncertain. These two young people are going through some tough times, making some tough discoveries. I was a kid once and remember it well. I've been getting to watch my kids now too. Heck, my oldest daughter wanted to take a semester off from college, so she ran off and got married. A year later she was divorced and back in school. Go figure? Life is trial and error. Maureen locked Cal out on a whim. He spanked her on a whim. Cut the kids some slack. Oh by the way. I need your comments, I love reading comments; but please why are all negatives sent by the same person. I wish old anonymous would identify his or herself. carvohi

She can tell that he’s starting to remember – why doesn’t she just tell him like she was told?

“You don't understand all of it yet, but I do."

So tell him!

Where did the dog and Mom go? Seemed to have lost them for the day.

He just went to full wife beater. You had him being fuxking Mr Rogers to him knowing it's a joke and full on meaning to hurt her. Sorry man you're a great writer but I can't continue the story, I'll try another one