All Comments on 'A Foreign Affair'

I had to read this twice! What a hot story.

My god my cock is hard as a rock!

My god my cock is hard as a rock!

Hi, loved your story and it certainly would be nice to have been in on it. Hope to see a follow up soon and ca't wait to hear about dad and other daughter.

Man, that was incredibly hot. Please, please sequrl this. You get a 5 from me, and I will be eagerly checking back for more.

WoW!!! What a hot story!!! This thing had me so hard during the whole story that I thought I would cum and never touch myself!! You are really good my man!!!

I can't wait to hear about Dad and Rachael!! This is really a fantastic story!!

A very enthralling submission. The alure of the foreign and the depravity is so satisfying. There has to be a sequel, and hopefully soon.

This is a good story you've got going here. My only big criticism is that it feels rushed. It would have been nice if you'd fleshed out the charachters and situations a bit more. You gave hints at doing this in places, but never came through on it. It's almost one long sex scene, and it's nice to have a little break between each one.

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damn, that story was so damn hot! I fucking loved it. You've got to give us a part two, and three, even...maybe even more.

Please, add some foot fetish in to the story. It thrilled me when Marie used Lisa's toes. I wish Marie would bring some fetish into the family. Please, write more....

The plot sounds sort of like an old erotica film. I think it was called The Lickerish Quartet.

nicely done. I usually don't go for family gang bang stories, but yours was very well written and I was drawn in, like the family was to Marie's sensuality. can't wait for Dad and Rachel to join the fun!

I wish you were still writing stories. 5 stars. Love this tale!

Viv le France!!! wish there was a part 2. great sex!!

Nice so far as it went, but we need a continuation narrative regarding Dad and Rachael . . .