All Comments on 'A Forgettable Night'

Fantastic start. I enjoyed reading this story. It is a great beginning. Please continue writing this story & I hope you will post a second chapter soon.

Great story!

I really enjoyed it!

Great story!

I really enjoyed it!

I never read multi chapter stories, but you MUST continue this saga.

A beautiful story that could continue with loving pleasure! As reading, I found it to keep my attention and found it to be rewarding as thoughts raced through my mind. True, Amy did not start out for this to happen but it did and that made it worth the experience and again I feel Amy would like for it to happen again. Thanks for an excellent story!

Superb is the best way to describe it. Great work!

Great story, Would you be interested in continuing it when they get home and sober? She could remind him it was her instead of Megan and start a new life together after high school and in college. Chuck

Very nice let the brother find out who he fucked and continue from there.

Really enjoyed it

Great ending which allows you to write a sequal.

I hope you do!

You must write a sequel to this story. It is terrific. Please write chapter 2 soon.

I hope to see you update soon.

I love love this one.

I wanna know if he'll know it's Amy. :D

If only I could gve you more than 5stars, I would.

Totally enjoyed it. I'd love a sequel to this one!

Lived it! Hope u make a 2nd chapter, can't wait to see wat happens next!!!

I hope to sequel to this storie!

I mean I hope u sequel this storie!

What's this sequel-mania about? Well... I have enjoyed the story as much as any of you, but I enjoyed the story for what I think the story stands for.

She got dragged to a party, she didn't want to attend, haven't had fun at all on the party untill... Well... Untill her brother, the drunk horny idiot confused her for his girlfriend...

What's a bored girl supposed to do, pinned beneath a guy double her weight, too horny and drunk to realize, who he is dealing with? She went along with the music, and got at least some fun out of the moment.

THAT'S what I really liked about this very story. ;-)))

I wouldn't mind a sequel... If it's written with the same wit and humor, this story had.

It's up to you JessicaLove85, to decide whether you'd like to write a sequel or not... And as you haven't wrote one by now, I assume you wont write it at all.

I already said, I'd keep an eye on your stories, because I like them very much...

I hope, you keep on writing in such a pleasant manner.

With regards from Germany

MaitreNuit

fuck ..incest stories are so turn on

The title of this story has the obituary in it: Forgettable!. There's no drama, no plot and the theme is weak. Twin siblings can make the bestest of the best of incestual bother and sister theme's, fictional and/or non-fictional, but this story has no inspiration to give the feeling to reader's of good sibling, male/female, brother/sister, love stories. Incest usually has two basic premises for occurring: Love or Lust.

This story has neither. The "slip" of Andrew's dick was strictly an accident? Not!!

This story has barely an introduction, no set-up for theme/plot, no character development with hardly any dialogue of substance. Amy looking for her drunk brother, a couple rolls on the bed, his dick "slips" into her pussy, and she's out the door! Something missing here.

The writer might have lot's of writing potential and maybe writing ability. This story is not the vehicle! My suggestion is chalk this one up to practice, get back into the batter's box and write for lot's of doubles and triples.

Liked this story, would love to see a 2nd part

That was intense!!! Please make A Forgettable Morning next;)

The other stroy I read by this author had good buildup. This one just jumped right in... Like a quickie. It was well written with one minor error, but it felt rushed.

Well done. Thanks for sharing it.